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How to Become an Apex Being

Author: MHK_
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What is How to Become an Apex Being

Read How to Become an Apex Being novel written by the author MHK_ on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Fantasy stories, covering action, adventure, magic, mystery, cultivation. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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What if you knew about the existence of energy and that the energy inside a human body can destroy a whole country if properly used(or should I say improperly), and that you can find loopholes in the body to use that energy, what would you have done ? This is the story of our MC, Achraf. A guy on the road to becoming an APEX. An independent existence, that can live without needing anything in this universe. Of course, the story isn't all about him. All the characters have a certain depth to their character and aren't just NPCs. And the story is gonna be a multilayered story with a lot of characters roaming around the world. It's my first time writing a novel, so if you have any remarks feel free to use the comment section to express those thoughts. *Warning* I use multiple POVs to make the story more interesting. The power system is logical and it has an origin, but you won't know the origin till later in the story.

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Yoooo I loved you're novel it was really good, I enjoyed all five chapters It felt like I was reading a biography, and I loved that. The narration of the main character to his younger self through his memories was really good. I couldn't find a single mistake, you're grammer and spelling were top notch There's nothing I didn't like about it, it's really good and I can't wait for what you have planned for the future of the series

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I like really the updating speed (a chapter per day), I didn't really like the chara design of the MC because there isn't any :'( . I didn't find grammar mistakes so that's a plus. As for the overall story, it's good and has a lot of potential.

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The main criticism I can make is its Waaaaaaaaay too rushed and I don't think the author understands the show don't tell rule. the author needs to slow down and SHOW me how his father was a good man not tell me. all the small things the MC mentions his dad did for him in that list the author needs to expand on them by giving them scenes. I know that is hard to do but it will make his death so much more impactful.

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