New writer still narrated nicely. Little improvement needed and expecting nxt chapter soon with some more improvements. Character were introduced very well and keep it high in next chapter. All the best
I'm waiting for you on the app's discussion channel!
Download the app to discuss your favorite works, TV shows, and even the weather with me!
A very decent start by author introducing two characters and one started read the actual story we are expecting to read. Small chapter but managed to explain the context