Really loving it from the start!! Captivating, great flow and description. Evokes so many emotions as you read through, and makes you crave from more!
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To be honest, this story has hooked me, especially Hope. The idea is great and so is your writing. I found little to no grammatical errors. I just hope that you will describe Hope's appearance and work on world-building. Overall, it's great work. Highly recommended. I have added it to lib and I am waiting for the next chap. :D
Unique and magnificent writing style will draw you in reading, and the chapters just flew by with a good and solid pacing. Interesting characters and...
I like the way that the author did this character and explaining the environment of the characters. she telling it but in a way that she don't do too much or too little. Good pacing.
Nice story, pace is stable not too fast not too slow. Lots of detail. It's nice to see how the FL is developing. ML comes across as strong but has its own insecurities. The story shows how he overcomes that. Every relationship has its plus and minus points. story takes us their ups and downs how they come together in the end.
The story like is quite intriguing. I got very curious just from the first two chapters. the story just carries me. Along, nice character development. The suspend in the story kept me on the book.
The storyline is interesting. I like the two strong characters. You don't struggle with the language so it's your advantage over the rest (non-English speakers), use it well! All the best!
The story is so good but I kind of felt something lacking still I enjoyed the interactions of Hope with her friends and her thoughts as well. Right, I'm kinda nd of excited what will happen to them? 🤗
The story is fast-paced and it makes you hold your breath. No fluff! It is so intense that if you read it before bedtime, you will dream of it all night.
This novel has a very captivating hook. Both of the leads are dynamic and their banter is enjoyable to read. The premise of the arena battle reminds me a little of the book, Red Queen. Though this novel has a fun (and less graphic) twist! However, I did find that the beginning was a little fast paced. The progression of events didn't seem realistic, and I wish I could've gotten to know more about Hope and her motivations before she was thrust into a new life with Drake.
I really love how the main character is an animal lover just like me and at the same time a golden heart girl who is extremely Brave and strong💖 can’t wait to see how the story develops😍
the first chapter was hooking. it gives a good Disney movie vibe. The character development is slow but intriguing. being a sucker of romance and fantasy the story development didn't come off as too good to me. but it's definitely a potential novel. keep on writing 💓💓😃🥰
Wow, it's not every day that I read a story like this. This is really good. The writing is good, the updates are steady, the worldbuilding is legit, the characters are cool, and the description is also great. The characters are well developed. The romance is fantastic. The story and pacing is phenomenal. It is exciting. I just kind of don't like the romance as well, but this story is 5 stars for me. Bravo. But I wouldn't recommend for anyone to use this book as a moral basis. It's very cool, but goes against some of my religious views. But for entertainment, it's outstanding.
❤❤ A great find with a strong characters. You can get frustrated at times but turn around and feel relief. That is what makes a book good, it makes you feel what the characters are feeling.
The thing which caught me about this book it is not the character, nor the family, nor the romance. It is the fantasy world building which is something every fantasy lover is looking for. Carry on!
Your story was AMAZING and fun to read too, kind of fantasy story am i right? 😍😍😍 The character seems really good and if you dont mind, check out my fantasy story : The Journey to the Dreamland
This story is a true work of art. The plot is very unique and different to the things I've read in the past. Anything can happen, so the readers are always at the edge of their seats. Great work Author!
this is such a good read! honestly i find it really hard to create chemistry between two dominant people.. but the author here does such a wonderful job at that! kudos to you author and keep on writing!
This is wonderful! The author has a fantastic way of describing things in a way that really helps you get a feel for how the characters think and act. Hope has to be one of the best characters I have seen written, she is brave, bold, and not afraid to say her mind. I love her dynamics with Drake- another great character. It makes for some really interesting reading, and her abilities with animals are really unique in this sense. The plot is great, quick moving and never stale. The dialogue is witty, humorous and detailed, overall, a really great read! You did a fantastic job author, you have my support!