HelenBold
I have to say, this book is amazing! The story is only at the begining (25 ch until now), but it already got me thinking about my life choicesđ in a good way. The writing is excellent and the story immersive. The characters feel real (especially Drake) so I'm looking forward to their further developement. But the thing that got me the most are the different world views of each character and how they evolve with the plot. P.s. for the author: I like how you are just done with giving trigger warningsđ
I am still dipping my toes into the fiction pool, finding what works for me and what doesnât. I hesitated to describe this book as a 'romance novel.' Sure, there IS a romance in this novel, but it is dark, and it mainly shows how hard love is, especially between two headstrong and domineering characters. The book will unfold the world and characters as you go along, with a less steep learning curve. Enjoy and feel free to comment, and I will try to respond to all of you!
"Will she be able to tame the Fire Dragon?" I certainly hope so. The name of the game here is hot, sexy, and spicy. R-18 for those who have some cravings, and their lovers don't need to know about it. I certainly won't be telling my girlfriend I read this. But I will definitely tell you to, because why not?
There is no one person that wouldn't find this book amazing. I like how the author slowly takes us on the journey through Hope's world of thoughts. MC is definitely a sweetheart, but the most captivating of her character is how she can show bravery in the face of danger. Then there's Lord Drake(no spoilers but he's as interesting as he is dark minded). Honestly, I want to see who gets tamed between the two. They are both domineering and I'm in for the drama.
Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady This is my review! Hope you like it! đ
Great job, i love how i feel like i am there with hope, the way the author describes Hope's surrounding, i feel like if i reach out my hand and close my eye that i will be there with Hope........................ I think Hope is the right amount of goodness and all things righteous to change Drake.................................................................................... 8d
FIRST OF ALL I REALLY LOVE HOPE, I WAS DROWNED INTO HER WORLD AND I DON'T THINK I COULD GET UP ANYMORE. And Drake on the other hand is kinda mysterious to me and I don't know what to expect from him for his character is unreadable. This is a unique story and has a lot of potential and I really love it! Good job Author I'm in awe with your skills in writing! Keep writing!!!!
The writing style has some questionable word choices and lacks the clarity and flow in my opinion, in comparison to my idea literature, but for webnovel, its pretty food. Characters... Ok, I've only read two chapters and I wont hide it, but they are one-dimensional cardboards. Drake in particular looks like a cutout villain more than any ML I've seen. The plot? I don't think this story needs one so much. In comparison to characters. But I think it would've been better with a better start than "local (dragon) lord was bored so he picked up random virgin who attracted people's attention to mess with her". As realistic as it is, it lacks a punch.
Animal communication powers ftw >:3 The majority of the writing flow is great, but the few moments where it slips up stand out all the more for it due to the contrast, but future edits will sand it down nice and smooth, I'm sure. All things that are bound to improve with time and practice, the content that's there is good and that's what matters the most anywho. Besides, what hiccups do exist are all still well above the average you'll see across this site. The initial setup to get the FL and ML to meet is a touch forced, but you gotta get there somehow and it's better than just starting already in the castle without acknowledging it. What matters is what happens when it's all actually underway after all. Interesting characters for sure, bound to be lots of fun over the course of the entire story <3
The FL is so cheerful and domineering! She doesn't cower even when the ML is scary lol I love the dynamic of their relationship I'm so intrigued by Hope's ability to tame the animals, it makes the story interesting. And the ML is such a mystery actually, I'm hoping for more interaction between them. As for the writing, I can say the way the author portrays the characters and their surroundings are vivid enough. I also appreciate the tidiness of your grammar and sentence structure including the paragraphs. There's no messy thing ;) Keep up the good work!