1 Before Reading: Important

Honestly, my thoughts on this Fanfic are; this fic is actually cool. I've read over 100 chapters, and based on what I've read, it's genuinely interesting.

You all might be familiar with some typical traits often found in Chinese protagonists, like the arrogance of the main character and the rest.

So I pondered if there was a way to write this story while toning down those Chinese characteristics.

Of course, I'm still staying true to the original work; after all, I'm not the original author. Everything the original author has crafted so far has been logical, and there haven't been any noticeable plot holes.

In fact, there have been some unique story arcs in this Star Rails fic that have piqued my interest even further.

Here are some things you should be aware of before diving into the story:

Despite the changes I've made, it's important to remember that this is still a translated Fanfic, so there may be some mistakes. In the original Fanfic, Cocolia had a strong dislike for the main character, but I've toned it down in this version.

Additionally, I've tried to make various adjustments throughout the story, although I'm not sure if they're for the better or worse.

The names was quite a challenge. I spent a considerable amount of time trying to find the real names of certain characters which were in Chinese translated format, and it even reached a point where I felt like I lost 90% of my brain cells in the process.

I've put in effort to improve the overall writing quality, I also used ChatGPT in various cases. For those who have read many translated works, you don't need to worry about the quality; I've dedicated more than 30 minutes per chapter to ensure it doesn't come across as overly Chinese in style.

The character personalities in the chat group have been a bit problematic. Originally, these characters were meant to be introverts, but the author seems to have altered their personalities significantly.

Rather than attempting to correct it, let's simply assume that their personalities have changed over time as they've used the chat group. This way, we can move forward with the story without dwelling on these inconsistencies.

I must confess that there might be a few inconsistencies in the initial chapters, and I'm a bit embarrassed about them. However, I kindly request that you overlook them for the time being.

Now, there's an aspect regarding the original author's choice to refer to the original MC of Star Rails as "The Galaxy Baseball Man." Of course, I added it like that in some parts.

Furthermore, I must admit that I find the main character's personality a bit perplexing. Even in the original work, they come across as a mysterious individual while simultaneously being laid-back and indifferent to most things.

In this version, I've made an attempt to give the main character a somewhat more guardian and somewhat serious-like demeanor and his other personality when he's not be the great guardian.

Ultimately, the judgment of this Fanfic lies with the readers. If you're interested in reading the original version, you can find it at this link: https://wap.faloo.com/1313809.html

However, be warned, it might be a brain cell-draining experience, much like it was for me.

If you prefer the translated version and want to avoid that ordeal, I'll do my best to provide regular updates. Thank you for taking the time to read.