Reviews of Honey : The Empire's Treasure
Honey : The Empire's Treasure
mountwolf89
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I read so much of this story to where its updated and honestly itβs one of the best stories ive read yet, the grammar and spelling mistakes are a bit much but if you ignore those the story development is amazing. The characters just have their own personalities and the story is funny as hell, i highly recommend it for anyone who likes these kinds of genres
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The story is intersting and the author did an amazing job creating and developing the world. But hear, I an sooooo annoyed with the Female lead and her antourage. I mean the Female lead has all this power but she willingly puts herself in danger just to see how far her eminies will go. 'Well b*tch I can tell you they want to kill ypu', you don't have to fall into their lots to see that. And her bodyguard is a piece of trash. I mean he is just useless
The book is great so far. But I'm getting annoyed with the Female lead as this her second life I thought she would be more cunning and smart but I find her annoying. She puts herself in harms way jus to see how far her enemies will go. I mean B*tch they are all evil, they want to kill you. So stop them before they start something.
Dear author, I love your novel soo much. It had hooked me up the moment I finished reading the synopsis. Also, I found it very catchy and just so heart-rendering while the FL's life as Lila. And now after her rebirth, FL's life as Mikaela is full of warmth, friendship, fun, a little rom-com, loyalty and all shades of life. Even though after her rebirth at starting I found the plot a little complex, but hey! It still came out pretty satisfying! The character development as well as the plot is amazing. Sorry for being a little too greedy for more updates!π All the best for future and hoping to see more of it!ππ Please don't ever drop it!π
The world background and overarching story seems incredibly interesting and I'd have loved to continue to follow the story but.. The main character is a top tier idiot. She lacks the ability to learn and the only character development she gets over twelve years in a second life is a short lived happiness. Seriously, living for around 30 years and being unable to see the malice clearly directed around yourself of children around 16, children you've grown up with... To have not created any defenses or any means to protect yourself and let yourself receive such a scar. If you can't learn from your first life, you don't deserve a second one. Reading this story to chapter 49 made me wish our protagonist would just stay dead - there are plenty of characters more worthy, no matter how horrible her first life was.
This story shows promise. There are a lot of errors, but they are negligible to an extent. Other than that , it's interesting. I didn't think what was happening to the main character was fair but now I get it. If you are looking for something interesting and ultimately quite good, I'd give it a try.
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