mountwolf89
It was just sitting there a while before I decided to start reading it, I liked it... The fl.. Has a decent character build.. Some characters though would make you swear.. So a heads up about that. Though the book have a few grammatical errors it is still well written. Since it's a first book, as the author said, what really really good is that she is open for many comments with writing quality and have been trying to fix as many as she find(she had said she was review chapters from so yeh.. My conclusion) All in all I just want to say thanks for writing I can't wait for the conclusion authorπππ
I have recently found this story and from a few chapters in found myself swept away. Now I have finished all released chapters and canβt wait for more. I try to avoid spoilers so while I am over 400 chapters in I havenβt found the story to have any lulls, just a very nice progression of events in the mcs life and how she reacts to them. I do have to admit there is some foreshadowing of events from near the beginning which are still being unravelled and I am eager to see where it heads.
DISCLAIMER All of these are my opinion and trying not to bash the hardworking author but point out my viewpoints. So take with a grain of salt. I felt this novel is overrated. I don't think its a solid 4 or above, instead maybe around a solid 3/5. Because it has excellent written quality but it lacks the extra oomph that makes me fall in love and binge read this novel. Thats if I compare it to how I usually am when reading magic/reborn novels. I love to read those in one sitting, but this one I read till ch 60 caught up to maybe ch 90 currently. I got to first give props to the complexity of the world building. Because thats takes brain power to even figure out the intricacies of the characters and their relationships. There is also the details that the writting envoked, the world building was subtle and character personalities was seen well through the writing. So although I'm frustrated, its still skill that made me allign with mika's life and her feelings.So ill give 5/5 for written component only. I would give 3/5 for overal story devlopment. I don't like that the book is depressing. In the beginning I didn't like how overly naive she was. But the author redeems themselves with the character of mika. She is badass and funny. So I do love the humor on the book. So the banter between mika and her companions is cute and the only light in her depressing life. Like after dying, she has to deal with her family responsibilities as a fae, deal with clan issue. And on top of that other ppl clan issue like can't mika catch a break. And I have got to say all males (except her guard and drako) in the book are selfish or just plain assholes. Her father I don't care I wont pity him because he made his choices and has to live with them. Its selfish to expect more from mikas mom or others. Thera or whatever that other clan leaders name was , he's a plain idiot, has too much pride for a weak ass boy, yes not man if he can't even see the things happening around him within his own clan, and has the balls to yell at mika or belittle her when she can see things more clearly.π€ππ. Overal my disappointment comes from being frustrated that mika has to deal with her father clan problems, on top of her fae ppl problems, on top of that boy whos clan got annihilated, on top of thera clan problems. There less funny and relaxing moments except for comic relief with mika witty combacks and her new companions. Again , author thanks for the hard work. FightingπβπΎ
πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
NΓ΄oooooooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COME BaaaaaaaaaaaaaaΓ’AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKMKM!!! DONT TAKE MIKA! You VILLAN! YOU FIEND! You bad BAD WORD!!!!!! Umm... I mean hey author sirπ₯ΊβΉοΈπ©π. Please donβt disappear. Just charge you deserve it. Youβve worked hard. Please donβt goππ£βΉοΈ There are not a lot of good quality stories with strong smart beautiful females consistently. There always weak at the moment they should be strong, stupid when they should be smart, vulgar when they should show an extreme high level of attractive class. Iβm soooo sick of it. These weak insecure male leads. Who have no confidence in themselves and trust in whom they chose to let their wives soar! I come from a family of nothing but strong women! Wife, Daughter, Mother, Sister Aunts, Grandmothers, Cousins, Friends, all STRONG! all INTELLIGENT! all GORGEOUS! Nothing is hotter than a confident woman. DONT! CLIP! HER! WINGS! And Iβm a MANπ€―! BRING! MIKA! BACK! ....pretty pleaseπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί