VOLUME 1: SUMMARY

Written by:The Remnant of Huaguo Mountain(花果山余孽)

The first volume of "Fuck the Wizarding Secrecy", with a total of thirty-six chapters, ends today. It feels worth summarizing.

This is the opening volume.

It starts with a "hard man who can't find a job" and ends with "deciding to become a revolutionary". The character arc is basically complete, which sets the tone for this book.

First of all, I am generally satisfied with this volume.

On the one hand, the overall rhythm is well controlled, although the first three chapters are too fast to accelerate the accumulation of emotions in order to finish the draft and to bring everyone into it faster.

But this is also the way for young authors to survive. If you don't let readers get involved faster, who will have the patience to see you stumbling into the street?

Moreover, I also agree with the rhythm and speed at the beginning. When any business story develops to a certain stage, it must learn to capture the attention of readers or viewers in a very short period of time.

Movies are like this, and online articles are so voluminous now, of course it is also like this.

On the other hand, I learned to use emotional lines or plot lines to plan the rhythm, and used methods such as detailed outlines to determine the general plot of each chapter in advance. It ensures that I can write without spending too much energy thinking about the plot, making the writing speed much faster than in the past.

However, I did encounter a small problem with this volume that I felt needed to be addressed.

One is the character of the protagonist. There was a comment before that suggested that the protagonist should not say too many swear words, and also said that the protagonist looked like a gangster.

Actually, I didn't intentionally design a protagonist with a bad mouth.

However, when I wrote the first three chapters, when I wrote about the troubles the protagonist encountered, the resentment and dissatisfaction of working as a worker, the unhappiness that life is always full of stumbling blocks, it has been accumulating in the protagonist's heart. When readers can empathize with the protagonist, it will also leave some mark on the readers' hearts.

Therefore, I want the protagonist to say that curse word for the readers, and I want him to stand for everyone who cannot act arbitrarily in a civilized society and raise the middle finger to the sky.

"Fuck the nine-to-five job, fuck the workplace and the drinking establishment, fuck the bad guys, fuck the whole world!"

Feeling good? Anyway, I think sometimes I need a few dirty words to calm my mind. Maybe younger friends don't quite understand it the pressure of middle aged.

However, as the protagonist's situation gets better and better, and as he gradually takes off, his anger will gradually decrease. When you have money, you will find that you are surrounded by good people.

The world is so beautiful, so naturally there won't be much anger. After all, he is our protagonist, so he cannot remain a grassroots person forever.

The second is about some plot controversies.

For example, Dobby came out to testify and so on.

In fact, reading is a process of mutual matching. Sometimes we can't stand some plots because we have another expectation of the story, or we have another view of the world.

No matter how outrageous the world is, as long as you can accept the author's setting, you can continue reading happily. The novels that breaks through the galaxy still has so many fans, so how can it not be outrageous?

But if you can't accept it, there's no need to force it. I will try my best to make it self-explanatory under my own general style and logic.

If it's because you want to watch something else, or if the plot development is different from what you expected, then just go ahead, I don't think it's necessary.

There are so many Harry Potter Novels out there, there is always one that suits you.

Finally, about the follow-up.

In fact, when I was conceiving this book, I had a lot of very big ideas. But to display them reasonably requires a smooth process.

Otherwise, I will just throw an idea here. Without any plot support, I am afraid everyone will find it baffling.

In short, I tried my best to keep the rhythm and not be sloppy, but I ask everyone to be more patient and follow it slowly.

Finally, I would like to thank all the readers, friends who have been voting, and friends who have written comments. It is very happy to interact with you and watch you compare your ideas. If you can speak, please speak more. I'll get back when I have time, and maybe I can get some ideas back.

I will also listen to criticism. There are a lot of good suggestions, and sometimes I just change them.

However, if it is based on poor quality, or I think it may affect the atmosphere, or make me feel uncomfortable, I may delete the post.