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Hitman with a Badass System

Author: don_offl
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firehawk204
firehawk204Lv15

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Menoriori_Grimm
Menoriori_GrimmLv13

Excellent work. Very enjoyable, love the characters, world backgrounds, and story development. Needs a little work in Grammer but Very enjoyable otherwise. Hope to see more of this literature.

Bunny_Nadine
Bunny_NadineLv10

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Enoch_Aryan
Enoch_AryanLv2

This is one of the best novel that you can get storyline, character development and overall but with all this i think it not getting enough attention it need

CHAOS_FOOLISH
CHAOS_FOOLISHLv11

Could someone tell me if mc and fl have already consummated their relationship? ..............................................................

Black_Star_0228
Black_Star_0228Lv1

really enjoying the story so far. Hey author if you reading this can you please give me an email or something? I need to speak with you regarding some business matters. Thanks.

Ajay_Aggarwal_6320
Ajay_Aggarwal_6320Lv1

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Daoist6CwmN8
Daoist6CwmN8Lv3

very nice.. compare to other books that keeps on dragging their story with non sense items..

THE_ARCHITECT
THE_ARCHITECTLv4

the story was good at first but it lost its spark because it was only about killing the MC has no character development

FF_AIM_BOT
FF_AIM_BOTLv3

really love it but the only problem is that the authour is dragging the story literally like alternate dimensions,universe and others except that it is really good 😊.

passing_cloud
passing_cloudLv10

Great novel, please don't drop it ............................................................. ..............................,............................. ....... .. .....

Gaming_King_0844
Gaming_King_0844Lv1

good novel but the author is introducing multiple universes which is kinda bad and dragging the story a lot except this reasons the novel is one of the best i have read so farâ˜ș

montana_wilson
montana_wilsonLv15

the author has created a fantastic world. Character design and development is top tier. Read this book!!!

Daoistwveffg
DaoistwveffgLv1

Honestly, I enjoy reading the novel.But I see the shortcomings of the novel and it saddens me. Personally, I think the author reflects his personal feelings too much in the novel. The side characters are well-constructed but not well-explained.World building and character stories are well designed and thought out I can only say that not all characters reflect their full potential.Even the system that mc has sometimes does not provide accurate information, for example, the total score is always in whole numbers and details are skipped.In my opinion, the author has a good imagination, but he cannot write this wonderful fiction and the world well because he has no experience.Although I enjoy reading the novel in general, I don't mind its shortcomings. Normally I think it would be better to give this novel 3 or 4 stars, but I give it 5 stars because I believe the author could do better.My only regret is that the author did not write this novel as a more experienced and advanced writer.Some people say that mc is unnecessarily overstressed and exaggerated, I agree with them.

J_TsWorld
J_TsWorldLv2

great novel, at first I didn't like it because of the grammer issues and how chaotic the whole start was but I came back and gave it another chance, which to say the least, I wasn't disappointed, although the pacing is still fast from time to time. The core and essence of the story is nice and you know how to keep reader's attention while setting up future plot points well. The only thing I can sincerely advice you on after 300+ chaps of reading is pretense. Its just you switch pretenses a quite often, You seem to be good at writing past tense and I sincerely hope you stick with it as it makes your story flow better.

World_traveler
World_travelerLv15

The level of hypocrisy and incompetence by the side characters is what ruins this for me it’s almost like the characters are preprogrammed robots

Unpaid_Landlord16
Unpaid_Landlord16Lv13

Hey author, are you planning on continuing The Legendary Emperor 2. That one is also nice so please do continue.

Serendipityy
SerendipityyLv2

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ImUnknown987
ImUnknown987Lv3

Does the grammar get any better? Im around chapter 20

Jayanth_
Jayanth_Lv2

one of the best story with best lead characters I have caught up to the novel in just 2 weeks ilove it 😍.one of the best stories but don't include multiple universes and make 14 chps per week that will be good 👍