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Excellent work. Very enjoyable, love the characters, world backgrounds, and story development. Needs a little work in Grammer but Very enjoyable otherwise. Hope to see more of this literature.
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This is one of the best novel that you can get storyline, character development and overall but with all this i think it not getting enough attention it need
Could someone tell me if mc and fl have already consummated their relationship? ..............................................................
really enjoying the story so far. Hey author if you reading this can you please give me an email or something? I need to speak with you regarding some business matters. Thanks.
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very nice.. compare to other books that keeps on dragging their story with non sense items..
the story was good at first but it lost its spark because it was only about killing the MC has no character development
really love it but the only problem is that the authour is dragging the story literally like alternate dimensions,universe and others except that it is really good đ.
Great novel, please don't drop it ............................................................. ..............................,............................. ....... .. .....
good novel but the author is introducing multiple universes which is kinda bad and dragging the story a lot except this reasons the novel is one of the best i have read so farâș
the author has created a fantastic world. Character design and development is top tier. Read this book!!!
Honestly, I enjoy reading the novel.But I see the shortcomings of the novel and it saddens me. Personally, I think the author reflects his personal feelings too much in the novel. The side characters are well-constructed but not well-explained.World building and character stories are well designed and thought out I can only say that not all characters reflect their full potential.Even the system that mc has sometimes does not provide accurate information, for example, the total score is always in whole numbers and details are skipped.In my opinion, the author has a good imagination, but he cannot write this wonderful fiction and the world well because he has no experience.Although I enjoy reading the novel in general, I don't mind its shortcomings. Normally I think it would be better to give this novel 3 or 4 stars, but I give it 5 stars because I believe the author could do better.My only regret is that the author did not write this novel as a more experienced and advanced writer.Some people say that mc is unnecessarily overstressed and exaggerated, I agree with them.
great novel, at first I didn't like it because of the grammer issues and how chaotic the whole start was but I came back and gave it another chance, which to say the least, I wasn't disappointed, although the pacing is still fast from time to time. The core and essence of the story is nice and you know how to keep reader's attention while setting up future plot points well. The only thing I can sincerely advice you on after 300+ chaps of reading is pretense. Its just you switch pretenses a quite often, You seem to be good at writing past tense and I sincerely hope you stick with it as it makes your story flow better.
The level of hypocrisy and incompetence by the side characters is what ruins this for me itâs almost like the characters are preprogrammed robots
Hey author, are you planning on continuing The Legendary Emperor 2. That one is also nice so please do continue.
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Does the grammar get any better? Im around chapter 20
one of the best story with best lead characters I have caught up to the novel in just 2 weeks ilove it đ.one of the best stories but don't include multiple universes and make 14 chps per week that will be good đ