Reviews of His Dark Desire: Tales of a Yandere

Ok… first of all, nothing compares to this book. I catch myself comparing all other stories to this one and none ever come close. The only negative i can comment on is the fact that i now yearn for this level of obsession and unrelenting love. Im married so wish me luck in trying to make him obsessed with me and make him my Dominus. 😩🤩

THIS BOOK IS SO GOOOOD!!! THE CHAPTERS ARE ENGAGING, THE PACING OF NARRATION AND WORDS ARE JUST RIGHT— EVERYTHING WAS RIGHT AND I'M LOVING ALL OF IT!!! I AM A FAN NOOOOW. 🤩 This might be overreacting but this is one of the best books I've found here. This book deserves massive recognition!!! 💖💖💖

it's good but I can't see to find your other stories like book one of the male lead is obsessed with me i can't find it with bewitching illusion and would like to see more of your work

Viewing just the first chapter alone is enough to draw you in, Love the words used and your writing! Sorry I couldn't review this until now. I hope you and however else reads this comes to know/realize how lovely your writing is!

Wow! we have another beautiful one from our wonderful author mary, i really love this, the first chapter made me really made me want to be the queen, if i could get someone as tall as that i would use him as a three and sit on his back all day!!! i love this book already!! awesome work author mary. 😍😍😍😍🥰🥰❤❤❤❤🧡🧡

It started off with a great thesis that has blanketed throughout the story, the very first line has gotten readers curious of what would happen next. The diversity between the male lead and the female lead was impressive- one huge and scary looking, yet well-mannered, while the other was small and frail, yet firm. It was a good contrast among the main leads and it depicts an interesting pair; a tint of cliché and originality to create this masterpiece.

Intriguing beginning and in general the story itself is well-written. The characters are also interesting. Mary, your novels are always interesting! I will read further.

This story is wonderful, I hardly ever like romance but this book caught my attention really quickly and I'm really excited to see what would happen next ☺️❤️

Brilliant!! Loved the story so far. The character and background development is perfect. Definitely recommended! Keep up the great work. Cant wait to read more

Hello author just finished reading your masterpiece! love the content and the characters. It is easy to comprehend, i manage to understand the whole story its so good. Patiently waiting for the next chapters Have Great day Ahead!!

The book was well written, an aspect that could hook readers to read more. I also like the concept of the story, I hope to see more from the author! 🤗

The writing is really good and really brings out the ideass of the author, the lore might not be for everyone, but it’s something that i never saw in other novels, it might be a bit simple, but that doesn’t make it bad, instead it focuses the reader’s attention on the two main characters instead of on other details.

I like the writing style and the way you portrayed the characters. It will be interesting to read how the story will unfold. Good work author.

I know he seems to be in love, but I can't wait to uncover the truth behind why a rebel would betray his brothers and return to be a knight in the same kingdom. The suspense is enough to keep me going. Good job, author.

the world is sometime unfair. it's the force of affection that makes us keep going. You have already taken a step and started the journey. Fighting! Good luck for WSA. .... Readers please show some love to this author.

Ok so for the author so far this is amazing and definitely hooks one in oj the romance and for the potential reader u should well do jist that and read! ! For anyone else... Still just read and support the author. Its simple

Woah, a story of a knight, sounds intriguing to me. I wonder who is the poor king here, lol. Anyways, I wish luck to Queen who has to deal with this night. Mary all the best for your new novel. Hope you will win this WSA. Best Wishes :-)

Whaaaa why only 5 chapters? :P I am getting addicted to this <3 and who did the artwork it is so beautiful ^^ . Okay coming to the story it is beautiful and addictive I am more interested in the male characters development in the story.

.................................................. it's Really A good Start. The Plot seems clear and simple. but there's more than meets the eye, so I'm pretty sure they'll be alot of interesting scenario coming up for the upcoming chapters. Keep up the Good work, Author.

I love the way their relationship is slowly building up as it makes me wanna root for them as time goes on and Dominus at first looked rigid and cold but it was just like a cover for his actual feelings which I found it sweet actually and I do hope his background can get more flushed out as with the world building too yest all these aside the story has a lot of potential and I'm here for it when it gets better over time