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Thanks Author for this story. Indeed Kay is very possesive and his character is clearly portrayed here. It’s amazing that Zila can stand Kay repeatedly treating her this way - perhaps that’s love to her. Well done in drawing out the emotions from Zila - moments when she was devastated where she felt captive by Kay and being bossed around and instructed despite having breakoff with him. The conflict is described clearly between both of them yet beneath the pride there’s still the feelings running deep between them. Hoping to see how Kay can drop his facade and be that gentlemen to her less the possesive loudness even if he is and treats her with respect. Aligned in his actions and words that comes from the heart. And if things work out for Zila for her to also question will she really love him for who he is or let him change and realised mutual respect and love comes hand in hand. Another angle to explore! In short well done in portraying the character clearly - showing Kay’s male chauvinism to the extreme here and Zila’s at times damsel in distress princess like character. Keep up the good work!
Highly recommend!!!! This book gets you hooked right off the bat. How it starts and spin off on the story is top notch, making one want to now what has happened and what will happen thereafter. Keep up the wonderful job Author! Can't wait for more chapters! [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
The novel has a good plot and it is promising. The author is successful in depicting the emotions portrayed by the characters. Normally there is too many cheesy moments in romantic stories, however in this story, author perfectly handles the situation not making it look overdramatic. I am looking forward for reading more. I want to know how Zila and Kay is going to utilise the opportunity that heaven has bestowed upon them. Keep up the good work
I gave updating stability 4star cuz...I found sometimes instead of Zen it was written Kay n opposite too....but then also I m falling for this story every now and then.....it's just like make you feel emotions which you don't even know....❤️❤️❤️❤️for the story it's....my heart..n I know you have a problem with English but being a reader I pointed out the mistake hope you won't mind that...❤️☺️...!!!with respect..