The start really blew off my mind. I find this book very interesting and exciting to read. As to not reveal any spoilers. I will keep it short, you guys need to read it to feel it. The descriptions are very well written. The writing is smooth. What else? I am not telling you all. Just go read it by yourself.
A great romance story for those who are experienced and those who likes romances. Has its unique storyline and plot. I like the story and will not hesitate to recommend it to others! It's intriguing and exciting. Read it and you wont regret your decision. **. Honest opinion ♥
The story is really good. As I continued reading the intrest and curiosity to know what happens next are increasing. It's really a good one.
Im not the reader type but after trying this, I Highly recommend it to everyone. The writing quality of the author is top notch and also the development of the story.
this story is very interesting! it really got me hooked from the very first chapter! and im looking forward for more chapter because its really a great book!
I was surprised that this story has something fresh to offer. It has an interesting plot and good flow in every chapter. It has so much potential, to be honest. Though I have minor issues in terms of technicalities in the usage of words and structure of paragraphs but in totality everything is great. I am giving this 10/10, Must READ !!
I really enjoed reading this story, especially key's character , good luck and I recommend this story to anyone who wants to have a perfect time reading a lovely story .wish you best and keep going, you are a talented writer,
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Premise seems to be done in a nicely-planned manner. Zila and Kay are really interesting leads, and the dynamic between them leaves a lot of potential. Have read the earlier chapters, and surely some of the easier formatting could be improved, but overall, a really nice and fun read!!
The love-hate relation between Zila and Kay is the BEST! My favourite part maa are this chapter end questions, it makes you want to find out what happens next. I have a feeling this story has so much potential and if the paragraphs are a bit shorter that would be nice. Great work, ZOA!
jealousy is the cause of all disasters.. i would like to see how the prince and princess overcome their hurdles.. over all the story is good and its very appealing.. Readers if you stumble upon this, grab it you will not be disappointed.. good job author
Amazing story, I find the way it's written to be really unique and enjoyed reading it very much I cannot wait for more updates in the future please keep giving us readers more. Thanks!
While I don't usually read this sort of stories, I think you did an excellent job at keeping it exciting and dramatic, which I think is the key. The pacing might be a little bit rushed at times but I think it really works in order to keep the suspense and shock in the reader. Overall, I think this story is very interesting and I'm looking forward for the next chapter! Amazing job!
My honest review: You did a good job. The only problem in this is that the grammar. A bit too much '?' or '!' this and that.. But that's my opinion. I read the first chapter and its going out great. Nice work!
The way the words are placed is so detailed. Although there is missing and misplaced punctuation, it can be brushed off since you can still understand the story altogether. I can tell that the author has put a lot of effort to put in even the smallest detail. Great job!
Great Novel. The writing is good and emotions can be felt from characters. I hope you continue because it's really awesome novel.. All the best
Great novel very interesting and is full of emotions especially love and jealousy. Novel is good but slightly hard to read, I would advice to space out paragraphs and speech and make your writing more structured. But other than that great novel, keep it up
Okay this book is wow. Like it's so nicely written. Although some chapters are like quick and the scene changes quickly. Maybe you could ease into change of scenes. But overall it is a very good book
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Your writing style is quite different than what I was used to but nonetheless . the way you describe things is so vivid I have no trouble visualizing them . this is a great story !