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Hidden in Time

Awoken in a cave not knowing anything, the main character of this story is on journey too learn and satisfy his curiosity. This is a slow progressing story, if you don't like slow progressing stories dont talk about it, if you don't like it and don't have anything nice to say dont say anything at all. Criticism and advice are accepted but plain out shitting on my work is not acceptable. plain out shitting on anyone's work is not acceptable. dont do it. Enjoy reading if you would and add this too your collection. updates might not always be steady.

xXxXx · Realistic
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14 Chs

The Boy

Crawling across the crystalline floor, the boy admires how clear and reflective the crystal is. not quite clear but not to foggy and as reflective as glass.

As the boy crawls towards the waterfall he admires how the sun lights up the water and causes sparkles through the cave. At one point the boy had gotten so distracted while he was crawling, he didn't realize how close he was to the waterfall until some water spashed onto the ledge.

*Splash*

like being woken by someone pouring a bucket of water on their head, the boy was awoken from his trance. Feeling the touch of the cold water, the boy shivered. Finally trying to touch the water out of curiosity, the boy reached his hand forward. Hand passing through the water the boy had an expression of surprise and curiosity.

Finally pulling his hand back, the boy looks at the water and then his hand and repeated a few times. Then he looked at the floor and proceeded to reach out and touch it. feeling to flat surface of the crystal floor, the boy had an expression of confusion.

Not wanting to try and continue the boy made his decision to see if he could crawl through the water. Crawling right to the ledge, the boy reached over and proceeded to fall off the ledge.