Haroldtigre
Brilliant! Superb! This book is astonishingly well written and it makes one fall in love with it from the very beginning. Your writing style is amazing, making it very easy to read and very enjoyable. You do a good job engaging your readers and making them hold on to your marvellously described and elaborated world and characters. I am a gamer and an RPG and JRPG fan and believe me all your wrote made a lot of sense. Your writing style is really good that I didn't realize how far I was into the story until I was in the last chapter. Thank you for making us have an awesome experience in your well crafted world. I will be anxiously waiting for the update.
Well the story is quite interesting in itself. There could be a little more descriptions of the settings and emotions but it is doing surprisingly well without it too. I usually don't read this kind of story so I found it pretty unique and specially how similar it really is to an RPG game. It has a right balance of various aspects and I especially enjoy the humour in between. A little editing of punctuation and grammar could increase its standard to another level but besides that it's well written.
the poor english writing quality, paired with the authors stereotypical protagonist and basic character design (along with a large amount of deus ex machina) makes for a poor reading experience. the MC might have redeeming qualities, but you cannot tell between the constant grammatical errors and extreme changes the author forces in each chapter.
I've played little so far (WarCraft 1 fan) RPG Games, among others, use computational logic, war strategy, artificial intelligence, control of emotions, they are adipitive ... persuasive, hierarchical. And writing how it is developing in a book is a great achievement. I congratulate the author for making this world known to us. And if it is very exciting from the youthful mind; I recommend reading it.
Am a fan of Japanese stuffs especially their animes and this book sincerely kept me intrigued,although there are some terms I don't understand,my imagination went wide when I read it. It kinda reminds me of jumaji you know entering a video game you were playing and now you have to defeat the ultimate Gillian,it's nice really superb. Nice job author💯💯💯💯💯💯💯