I love how original it is this is my first muslin story I ever read and being a nonmuslim I think it beautiful to see a book perspective about different cultures and religions. I'm a huge sucker for diversity and I'm so hooked on the love connection and the plot and how lovely this story is written. keep up the good works I just spotted gold in this book.
This story is very interesting, it is bursting with colors! This book made made me reminisce my youth, feeling infatuation, made me convicted because I wrote unholy scenes hehehe and then felt blessed at the same time! Asalamu Aliekum Warahmtullahi Wabarakatu. Allah has inspired me today. Thank you!! I'm not done reading though, but I will definitely finish this..
This is the first muslim novel that I will read ever and it truly amazes me to see someone actually be different and make a hit. I do sincerely hope this novel gets successful in the coming future. The writing and the word choice is astonishing for me. I love to see that our male protagonist is just a sweet and caring person from the start like how he meets his mother in chapter 1. I can't wait to read more!!
I love that you utilized foreshadowing in your work! And nicely done^^ Although, one thing, I really would like to understand the conversations happening so for that, I suggest if you're really apt to using your language, have vivid but concise description at the end. Some part were also lengthy so try to break those into two. Nonetheless, it is a great start! Considering this is your first stepping stone. Keep up and fighting!!
This, is beyond interesting, the character's and the diversity that has been introduced in each of them is amazing. Your creativity is really mind blowing. I love it. It really compels me to continue reading this, I absolutely love this. Its amazing. Well done and keep up the good work. I love the plot as well.