Reviews of Heir of Aurelian
Heir of Aurelian
Zentmeister
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This has been a long time coming can't wait to see what Zent does with this novel after all ToS was great and with the year extra experience under his belt Zent will be able to do a lot better with this one. Still ToS is amazing as well. Anyway I know this is going to be a good one (that will also hurt my coin pouch)
The story had enormous potential, but it was destroyed. From chapter 1~17, 12 chapters are 100% disposable. The main character should reincarnate facing the numerous difficulties, including psychological problems of being trapped in a newborn's body until adolescence, and show the enormous advantages and disadvantages of that time, until the beginning of the military campaigns. I expected a lot from this story, but it's a waste of time.
I read up till ch.18 but nothing of interest happened. MC got a memory of the future but had done nothing about it. He's still the same man so to call this transmigration or reincarnation is not entirely correct in my opinion. I thought even if it's just memory, he'd use that to his advantage, but nothing of the source at all. I will continue to see further but if MC didn't take advantage of what he has, then I don't see the point of continuing with this story. Came here for a future knowledge kingdom-building story, and till now, nothing happen most of the early chapters can be skipped and you hardly miss a thing.
I hope you don't make the same mistake of the tryanny of steel and introduce the guns to fast and focus on cold weapons and infrastructure also it would be nice to see more kingdom building instead of war and also hope you introduce heram as its fairly common for powerful men to have them and it died after Christianity took over and to all the people who complain about the girls falling for the mc easily in tryanny of steel are stupid first he is the mc second he is handsome third he is rich and powerful and in old days where daughters wear wed to just gain some profit and have to say in whatsoever its not hard to imagine why they fell for him being liberal and all the above reason so they are just stupid I hope you add heram in this also hope this novel also has the mc writing books on philosophy and what not as he lived in the future and describe how thing might be in future English is not my native tongue sorry
Honestly, I'm only writing a review to find out if the author is going to continue it, I never felt that a novel in Webnovel was worth paying for until this one, I like kingdom building and this one does it very well, things are well studied. I like that it is not a reincarnation or a normal transmigration, the mc receives memories through dreams, but he feels Roman, for those who complain that he is stupid, that is honestly the reason why I gave him a 5 star in construction character, normally in Webnovel they are usually made into perfect gentlemen from the beginning, but they are just characters, they don't feel human. It's a shame that he ended up in the fight for Persia.
first of all he doesn't have an advantage because his memories only come when he gets hit in the head, second then there is no need for him to introduce firearms, although there are hopes of cannons or grenades and the like, third, first we it shows a brave and strategic young general, but then it shows us a weak general, incompetent and I don't understand the last thing, if his soldiers have armor, experience, he can finish him off but he decides to be a hostage, pathetic. Although I know what you want to get with the problems you face although it is good but it does not fit much.
I LOVE THIS BOOK. There's finally a good book that's about the WESTERN ROMAN EMPIRE on here. I've been waiting for a really long time for it to happen. SO PLEASE AUTHOR DON'T DROPPED THIS BOOK IT'S GOING REALLY GOOD SO FAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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