Heavenly Dao Child

i like how you have portrayed the MC since he was young instead of being someone who is already in his teens, the MC is strong but noway he without faults

MC is an overly overpowered type compared to peers and similar ages. Currently (Ch139), no FMC shadow or introduction to the story yet. However, the world background is a bit bigger than other similar novel type and there are a few of character introduced in earlier chapter don't have their conclusion yet. My own opinion would be that MC level up a bit fast and don't have any hair rising chapter yet. I think the future story development would be very complex. Therefore it is good to start from beginning for new readers.

Haven’t read it yet but am hoping for a good read lots of luck with author giving 5 stars May rate again if not deserving but I hope it willl be

to start love the story and mc i love the fact that he has naivety and if it wasn't for those fake sisters it would be better. second the writing is all over even in the 100s small spelling mistakes are made sometimes you have trouble even reading a sentence. third why did you put him close to such people their still making the same mistake all over again if ryuu wasnt so naive I think he would have left already or at the very least kept their relationship at a professional level. third at times you just skip out on parts to go to a future date then sometimes you will highlight parts that's not so important while making other parts that could be important seem small. fourth you started off with a heavenly dao child but then it seemed you didn't like that so you both slowed his cultivation and skipped over his whole training. fifth this book is great just missing a lot to get to awesome. maybe I'll come back one day to finish reading it.

could not read the first chapter until the end it's too disgusting, and it's annoying that there's no lower score to give.

Trash grammar, immature story, horrible writing that you cannot make sense of. Even though the concept is interesting the things i mentioned above and many more make continuing this novel not possible for me at this moment. And honestly just look at the titles and you will understand the level of this novel.

At the start, I liked the story. The plot is good. But what has become painful to read is the repeated severe mental or physical injury of the main character at the end of every major arc. It is as if his abnormally massive good karma is just for show and he is plagued by bad luck Everytime he tries to do something major.

The concept is great but the implimentation bad. There are too many glaring plot holes and interms of power levels or combat strength it's somewhat inconsistent. If only author had done a better job since the novel had great potential.

Its alright, sometimes the plot can be a bit ridiculous and strange. What really puts me off is the grammar. The Author tries to say too many things in one sentence and it ends up being a confusing jumble of words. It honestly reads like a machine translation. I can’t read this, purely becuase of the horrendous grammar and writing.

weird wording and many basic mistakes ..............................................................................................

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One of the best novel in webnovel. In the beginning, you will find some writing mistake but as the novel goes along the author improves a lot. In regards to the novel is has good character development. I definitely recommend.

I think, his cultivation is slow if compared with other MCs from other novels. He started cultivating from age 05, he had all the resources, all the books, the physiques of God tier body and dao child. With all these he cultivates really slow. Other MC starts really late and yet reach the peak withing 6 to 10 years at most within their universe. Only a xianxia reader that read many xianxia would understand that his cultivation is slow considering all the advantages he have. in the story it was said that he can gain enlightenment on Daos anytime he wants and yet he only has Sword, fire, alchemy, a bit of Ice dao and so. Author must remember the title of this novel seeks for OPness. But if in the story mc isn't as op as described in the titles then we will be disappointed. His cultivation is slow really slow. Instead of time skiping so much author should've fastened the cultivation speed.

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Hi, The story is good. the pacing is a bit slow, but still interesting. I like world where story is built, characters are good. Keep it up. Thank you!!!!!!

This is a great novel that is mostly light hearted and fun with the main character a young boy ho is innocent and a bit ***** about certain things like why a lady would wear tight fitting clothing. It is something that I would recommend to anyone because even though the MC is a bit over powered it is in a logical way

aside from bad writing, all characters in this webfic regardless of powerlevel are stupid AF 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

Slow story with annoying characters especially the mc good luck 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑 bruh these 140chp bs