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Heavenly Dao Child

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recep_ozboga
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taodaoist
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I can’t with good conscience give this story a good review, the grammar is absolutely horrible, not bad, not very bad but horrendous, many mistakes and very poorly put together sentences. The character feel shallow and fake, and the very poor grammar just makes it even worse, so far the world backgroubd is nonexisting so I am sorry author but please get better at english or have someone translate this for you from your language to english, as of this review I have read til chapter 12 and I gave up! Hope you get better!

Ascend
AscendLv5Ascend

It's a good novel .it doesn't seem like that at first as there are many dramatical mistakes and plot hole but it becomes better as you read.you should definitely give it a shot.

MR_FOOL_
MR_FOOL_Lv1MR_FOOL_

the mc seems too naive and good hearted will it always be like this? or will he change ? i hate these naive mc's always forgiving. i bet he'll forgive his parents too who tried to kill him then he had to leave with his aunt to live in a distant village which caused his neighbour to die and aunt to get injured. but he will still forgive them i bet in the name of 'filal piety'. sigh i hope the mc dies and someone else reincarnates in his body. nice story but trash mc ruined it for me

Daoist_Paradox
Daoist_ParadoxLv4Daoist_Paradox

This is a lame novel. 01. Although the MC is supposed to be the Heavenly Dao Child, his progress and intelligence doesn't match that title. 02. This novel is being sold as a Xianxia, but there's a lot of unnecessary drama. Okay, these two points cover everything. I didn't find the beginning chapters interesting.

Rahul_Kiro
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primal_chaos_void
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I like the story and have recently been reading it and it is fantastic in my opinion and I hope there will be more chapters (currently chappter 496)

GoWithTheFlow
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in my opinion i believe that this is an awesome story. im currently on chapter 130 and i cant see why the ratings is on 3.8. i mean sure the grammar isnt the best but its not like you have to turn your brain off to read it. the thing it lacks most is the the commas. sometimes its pretty hard to read when theres no seperation and i had to peice some if the words tigether in my mind. anyway im only on chapter 130 and havent read the whole thing hence i cant say anything else other than how its going pretty good so far.

IAwardRewards
IAwardRewardsLv5IAwardRewards

please give some love to this story. It's getting better and better. Yes, there are grammatical problems, but I can still understand the meaning. So yeah, you just need to be a better reader.

NoNameDeity
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Myranda_
Myranda_Lv6Myranda_

I really enjoy reading your story. Their are quite a few mistakes in the writing but its completely fine to me because not all stories are prefect. i also tealky enjoy the older sisters in the book.

Danely_de_Sapire
Danely_de_SapireLv2Danely_de_Sapire

Verei, heid ler a historia e espero nao ficar decepcionada, oh, vamos ver Verei e espero gostar da historia, e days personagens da historia sim espero.

TomDickAndHarry
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The synopsis only is great. I havent even started reading the novel but im sure that this novel is greatness. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

dkennedyb1988
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Thanks for the novel 😄😀😁😃🙃😂😍😘😘😛😛🤪😜😝😝😜😘☺🙃😄😆🙃😊😗😚😗😚🤑😝☺😚😊😆🙃😅😁😅😉😊😘☺😘😜😗😛😗🤩🙃😄🙂😉🙃😘😊☺🤪😚🤪☺😙😀😃

SageKai
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ImmortalGodslayer
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I have no Idea on what to say about this book. I had such high hopes when I read the beginning and the author ruined it. First of all, I wish that the author can improve his writing style. Second, I believe that the plot could be adjust because this is kind of ridiculous. Third, the character development can also be improved.

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Dosithee
DositheeLv5Dosithee

Grammar is very bad. Dialogue is cringy. Couldn't get past these to aspects. Bht others seem to like it. Thank you author for your hard work, this is just my opinion, but I encourage you to keep it up. Writings super hard and the key is to write, it doesn't need be perfect or have everyone like it.