Sunus_Writes
Amazing story with fantastic world building. There are so many things in this fantasy world that it really made me stick to the novel continuously. The only thing which I found pointing out was that the author needs to increase the vocabulary. Whenever I read the sentences it cuts so abruptly that I need to re read again this disrupting my flow. On the other hand, everything has been described so precisely that you can see the effort author put in this novel. There was a minor issue, which I've already mentioned in the comment. I wish author best of luck for his work☺️
I find this creation interesting to read, with a great scenarios for every chapters. You can love the FL's character, a fighter one which makes the story runs quite well. In the traditional world of publishing, narration always in the past tense and the dialogue in the present tense, plus you need some proofreading and add appropriate punctuation marks, though I could say that it never affect the interest of the story. A great read for everybody
Great world building. The story line is well written that it matures like fine wine as you read the next chapter lol. The author knows how to present her vision in words and that helps you see the world through their eyes. The characters are relatable. The grammar is quite good, the only issue I might have is that the paragraphs are bulky but the way the story is told it does not take anything away from it. A good read