In celebration of writing the 10th chapter, I am once again writing a shameless review. This is a story between two characters loving each other at different times, so it is full of angst and frustrations. Although there are fluffy moments in between, the road to healing and redemption is long and arduous. I hope that you, the reader, can accompany them through tears, heartbreak, and enventually joy as you watch these characters grow and become better. Enjoy!
I can't believed that I forgotted to post a review before😅 This is the kind of story that really can make your day, but beware you day could me happy, sad, worried, excited, warm or cozy .. all this difference is because author can make you feel so many emotions, love or hate characters and a great portraited trama.😍😍😍🤩 Y para los lectores de habla hispana, echense un clavado en esta historia les aseguro que se ahogaran entre tantas emociones que no querrán dejarla.😍😍😍
On ch. 35 and so far loving and hating this book. Kaidens experiences make me wanna cry. I want to hug him so bad. At this point Damon does not deserve him and i hope they don’t end up together. I’m hoping Kaiden overcomes his fated pair bond and finds someone who won’t hurt him like Damon does. Someone who will love him deeply and completely. Just thinking about him and Damon together in any capasity makes my skin itch. Also i really want him to get healing for himself. Poor boy needs it and more. Now as the story goes on will i change my mind? I don’t know. Will Damon reedeem himself? I don’t know. I do like his new friendships and I hope they stay and continue strong. Looking foward to the next chapters
writing quality 5 star- I think this is a great story!!! The writing is good. the writing is understandable, and I don't see any mistake in writing. story development 5 star- story development is clear and we know what we should know. we also know that we are going to cry from it. the characters' design 3 star - sadly, ( in my opinion ) i think their design is not satisfying. I know and understand the reason why the omega has small and frail body is because he didn't get proper meal. I don't hate it, but I just can't feel the excitement during the humpty dumpty scene because of the big size difference. The alpha is 28 which is a good age, sadly he can't get it up. "I believe this is why he's so cranky". The omega, luckily has passed the legal age at 19. I just wish he cuts his hair shorter( i only read until chapter 5). I don't really like a girly appearance for bottom because, my taste is (top looking but is actually a bottom × gentle, harmless looking but is actually a top). The updating stability and the world background is good in my opinion. I give them 5 stars.
I absolutely love this roller coaster ride of a story! The characters are well developed and over filled with emotions, you end up crying along side the characters hating, hoping, loving ❤ ♥ 💕 So many twists and turns throughout the first volume, I sit and wait on pins and needles for the next chapter. I can't wait to see what the author has planned for the couples and friends. Its a great read definitely worth your time reading.