Harry Potter Transmigration

Re-writing "Reborn as Harry Potter" as I feel it will flow better this way. I'll leave both novels up for comparison reasons and let me know what you guys think in how the story flows. An 18 years old boy has just finished reading what he found as the most annoying series of books ever: the Harry Potter Series. There were two reasons for his annoyance with the series. One: our MC was also named Harry Potter and he was greatly teased by it. Two: the main characters in the books were seriously underdeveloped. "I mean come on, an average guy defeats the most powerful evil wizard alive? Who are you kidding?" P.S. I do not own Harry Potter. This is purely fan-fiction.