I really like this story. I am at chap 420 and really can't wait to see how the story develops and how the characters interact. The characters and world is great in this novel. keep it up author 💯🥳
Phenominal book. It skips the awkward stage of the beginning by having the mc already lived and settled in harry potter univers. The mc is great and the story has flashes of brilliance. I still feel the author has room for improvement and i look forward to his future stories.
It's a power fantasy that is very silly. Mc is way too perfect and good and all-knowing at everything. It's just too silly like a parody taking itself seriously. I also dislike the constant exposition and monologuing of the mc and a lot of stuff just gets told rather than actually done and shown.
Por mucho puedo decir que es el mejor fanfic de Harry Potter, la verdad me tomaba el tiempo para empezar a leerlo porque la sinopsis no atrapa mucho además de la imagen de la portada se ve aburrida, pero la forma en que llevaste la historia del mundo de Harry Potter a la de contruir un imperio y conquistar diferentes universo es muy entretenida bueno excepto una parte del arco de black Clover pero por lo demás muy bien, además me gusta la forma en que haces funcionar las relaciones con sus esposas y no lo convertiste en alguien que agrega a cualquiera a su harem, pero en vez de Oliver que puso como comandante hubiera sido mejor sumeragi lee de Gumdan digo para comandante es de las mejores estrategias, aún así muy bien por las otras esposas agregadas [img=recommend][img=recommend] ahora solo esperar cada semana las actualizaciones
First, go and read the description. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Done? No? Don't wanna read the description? Nvm then. This novel is a fricking wish fulfillment. What did you expect? Reverend Insanity? Worlock of the magus world? or house of horror?? The author has done an excellent job no matter if he is an amateur author or not!! The story surrounds a character you wish you would be in your world! The perfect smart, charming. intellectual man. a man who has both the talent and the plot armour. This is a power fullfillment novel! although there isn't much hardships, the author has said he will be introducing it in the latter chapters when it really matters. If you want to relive a life where you are the almost ideal man and the author is your homie, then this fan fic/ infinite genre book is your destination. The grammar might be sometimes a bit off, but if you know even a little bit of English then it won't be a problem. The side characters are good but could be made better in he 300s chapters Anyway give this a try if you like the description.
Writing Quality: 5 Stars. Update Stability: 5 Stars. Story Development: 5 Stars. Character Design: 5 Stars. World Background: 5 Stars.
I just don't like the world/universe he choose after Harry Potter
Honestly speaking I feel like I'm reading a journal or someone's diary rather than a story. Feels like one of those power fantasy cultivation novels.
great book I love the idea and i couldn't find a way to msg you so i am gonna write here . next world witcher a great place to get the knight system better as well as monster biology and other stuff , dark souls is also a good one gives into reincarnation or the idea of infinite life as well as a new evolution path . cant wait till you also get into the marvel road . the hobit franchise will also be nice as percy jackson and its gods , there is also a funny movie night in the museum not sure if this one is good but beh . aladins jeanie would also be interesting. all I can think of for now might write another comment in later chapters k bye
I was swayed by several lily this lily that or someother reviews to not read it for quit somewhile but let me tell you it is a masterpiece till the harrypotter world no doubt about it. the 2nd world is full metalalchemist which i am not a huge fan of so i didnot enjoy it to that degree but you must give this a try if you love harry potter world.
everything up to chapter 113 is great, after thats its quite meh .................................................................................
Believable ruthless MC is a very hard character to right and this one manages to strike the balance I rate it right up there with “reborn In naurato with talent” good story.
I really loved it so far. Highly recommend it. Many people will enjoy the diversity this book has to offer. The imagery is exquisite and the characters are simply wonderful. A most pleasant read. [img=update]
I love your Novel and by the powers vested in me I order you to never drop it or I will drop a Boulder over your head, lol, seriously speaking I will kill you if drop it.
this fanfic is amazing I like how you set up the philosopher's stone for the future 👏 I can't wait for new chapters. I also love how you explained magic that there's no magic in air right know but there may have been in the pass and the only magic is the magic core....... I think after your done with this world you should go to the witcher world .
Very good, I just hope it won't get dropped! ................................... ................................... ...................................
This fan-fic has new exciting ideas, a new take on magic and it has excellent would building.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It seems like one of the best HP fanfictions I've ever read and it seems to be heading in an unexplored direction. It has enormous potential and the author is doing a good job of it so far! I hope it doesn't get drop or the updating stability drops to 1 chapter a week. Author-San keep up the good work and as Dumbledore and Olivanders would say "We expect great things from you!". 😊😁👌👍👏🤩❤️
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To me this is the best novel on the platform.