Reviews of Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard


Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard


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I haven’t started it yet, but I really like the idea of this fanfic and wanted to give you some support. So don’t you dare drop it.

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I thought how it progressed , turned out to be worse and worse in every chapter . And about bringing Lily to life for a deal with Snape is really ridiculous, just use mind reading techniques that have been there, why bother ". I knew that multiverse fanfics would only destroy the intended world, not explore the potential that exists and take advantage of it.


It was going good at first but chapter 10-11 ruined the story for me. So it pretty much went from going good to boring and garbage real fast during those chaps.


Good story you have here, I like the aura of mystery and confidence of the MC as if everything was part of his plan (Similar to Yasuo Zoldiack from HxH), I can only ask that you consider including Bellatrix lestrange as a love interest (You reduce him a little madness and you have a perfectly tamed yandere beauty), Hermione granger for their shared passions (Knowledge, discovering the truth and for lack of better words, her character and beauty) and Luna loovegod (For her calm, beauty and why she is a breeze fresh for anyone)


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Good, and that's it. it's nothing special that you would be excited reading, and one thing is for sure.....it keeps goind down .............


The story follows a cautious reincarnated man trying to use magic to explore the vast universe/multi-verse around him. Then around chapter 40 he forgets caution, reason, even his most bottom line for humanity and experimentation and just starts running roughshod over everything and everyone. I don't know if you have tired of the wizarding world or are desperate to change scenes but it feels rushed and the pace has been accelerating since the end of year one. The story updates frequently and the writing style and grammar are understandable.


The description already makes the author sounds like a whiny nihilistic loser. Gave it a quick read on my mobile today (without reading the description fist - I know huge mistake) and had to stop at a few chapters. God it is aweful.


Decent read, but while the idea is good, the characters aren't that likeable, especially the mc. Read it if you want to have a harry potter fanfic read in your pastime.


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Honestly it's extremely well written, exciting, and makes me want to read it honestly. The only reason I gave it 4.8 stars is coz I don't know the stability of updates yet


Lily cucking her husband and not caring about him. She already chose Snape when she told James he can leave through the door if he doesn't want a polygamous relationship. James should just ask for a divorce. The fact the author let the readers chose her Harem route was a huge mistake. The author wrote it all out in a poor scenario also. Just ruined the novel for me.


The story is about a guy who got reincarnated in H.P. during Voldemort's War but it tells his life after a couple of years later when head canon starts. The Plot= Dude died reincarnated to H.P. did the standard rise to power and riches routine but it is told in the background since we all know those tropes already. His main goal is unique because it's about finding a way to other dimesions. I mean he was like us mortals but then he got transported in H.P. but what about other fictional worlds? Can he traverse other worlds? That's his goal, to travel across dimensions. The setting= Almost original H.P. world but his previous actions during his early years change some of it but not too much. Just read I don't want to spoil. The MC= A curious MC. He's also self aware of what he's doing. He's like a chimera of Slytherin's ambition, Gryffindor's courage and Ravenclaw's pursuit of knowledge. (sad Hufflepuff) My verdict= So it's another fun H.P. fanfic for now. But think of it as a prologue of how the man discovers a way to other worlds. Enjoying it now because he's drive for his goal is actually fun. The choices he makes is all for that one goal. I do hope author gets to the point where he explore other worlds.


The main character exhibits traits that are all in line with a psychopath which only seems cool but quickly becomes uncomfortable to read if you have a conscious and don't need therapy for aforementioned mental condition. This is one of those story's where attractive women seem to exist for the sole purpose of being madly in love with the mc for no reason, so if that's your thing great but like I said before therapy is an option. This story is not the worst but in terms but if your looking for good story and characters there are better options and if you are looking for a great HP fan fiction because you like source material then this story basically guts what it want while ignoring what it wants to Frankenstein some simbalence of a story rogether.


Great Read (im at chap 30) Everyone is complaining about MC reviving Lily, but in the end its just him researching to revive his parents and just making and extra body for lily and therefor getting snapes knowledge and also probably loyalty....YOU GUYS dont know after 15chaps what MC and Author are planning with it, he is portrayed as quite ruthless in his research (using humans and wizards as laborrats and also thinking about kidnapping tonks to study her metamorph-bloodline) SO PLEASE stop hating and hiving bad reviews just bc you dont like a single thing in the fic, which is still at the beginning and everything can quickly change ....


I know you are an Worlock of the Magus World fan, and from a fan to a fan ,I like what you're doing and I hope MC of this fan-fic at list achieve One head's Worth power/knowledge of Nine-Headed Nightmare Hydra


The writing quality could be better but I've seen worse. The story itself is straight-up wish fulfillment with hardly any effort to make realistic interactions between the MC and the other characters. It's good enough to read if you have nothing else and you're going into withdrawal.


Great chapter. Excited for more. One question - Why susan calls him cousin. Never seen little cousin who calls their elder cousin by `cousin´… just say edward


I think this fan-fic is like wuxia fan fic because the personality of the mc is like a hero of wuxia or xianxia but with some common sense and I have seen many Chinese fan-fic where are some of the things that You showed how future ideas of the mc or possible futures or yugioh or that I be a teacher instead of a student and so, only that you have done a very nice time skip and I feel that in 300 chapters you will make me feel more satisfied than watching 900 or 1500 of how are the 7 years of harry potter plus some extra plot


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