Intermission

Hello, author here with a request.

Firstly I'd like to thank all of you that came this far into this story. What was meant to be a fairly quick write suddenly blowned up into a more serious venture.

What probably most of noticed was that I'm writing this on the fly. Trying to keep up with a weekly schedule.

And now the story is at crossroads. And I'd like to hear your thoughts on the story.

I'll write a couple of questions where you'll be able to leave a comment, and share what do you think.

Is the story progressing too fast?

Do you enjoy the more complex magic system I'm trying to build up?

Are there magics you'd like to see and in who?

Are the characters believable?

Are there any characters you think I've done wrong?

Are there characters I should do more justice(because they weren't mentioned or build as much as the others)?

Do you like the romance or am I under or over doing it?

What elements of the story you like the most?

What parts do you find lackluster?

Are there any relationships you'd want to make happen in this story?

Are there any plot points you want me to explore more?

Are there any plot points that should phase out ?

Is there a plot point you wish would happen?

Do you want special side story chapters where I'll explain some of the characters backstories?

Do you want the back stories only be in the form of snippets in the main plot?

Are there other vital not mentioned questions I should post here?

How are you doing?

Other complaints please give here.

Once again thank you for going on this journey with me. Thank you for enjoying this ride as I am.

And for now I'll leave this story on hold for a week or two so I can read your comments and plan out the story for future chapters.

This is it for now. And I'll see you next time here at Challenging Fates.