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It's an amazing story because everything flows so we'll and the characters are actually like able,the main character is kind but he actually cares about his family and is ruthless to his enemies, my biggest draw to this novel is the character development because it feels so satisfying and keeps me attached to the story..its also not harem what else do I have to say.
I really like the story so far. It has a lot of potential, and looking forward to how the story will play out.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Well, this story overwhelmed me and felt bored at the point when i finished reading 200 chapters. It's because there's too much talk about muggle business and politics, and it bored me to the point where I forgot the part of the story about the wizarding world because the story about the wizarding world seemed to be just an interlude to the story. Compared to reading a fanfic about the wizarding world of Harry Potter, I feel like reading a story about a little genius who manages a government and become a great businessman too.
Honestly, I'm amazed by quality of this fic. Characters are not bland and they are, for god sake, GROWING AND DEVELOPING. also, author did a really good job on historical facts on both real world and HP. My personal top3 novel I've ever read, along with release that witch and 3 days of happiness. Im really enjoying this work and after its done I'll go for other works of this author
Seeing as we are nearing the end I decided to write a review on this. As always, the author delivered a well written, well develped awesome story that had me hooked and WOULD NOT LET GO!!!! First of all, the characters: Really great characters and character development (Magnus, Adam, Grace, Emma, Ragnar, Severus and many more, I liked them all) The story: Simply GREAT! A mix of HP with kingdom building and just the right amount of violence. I wanted to keep this concise and straight to the point as I honestly could right a proper review, but don't have the time and I suck at writing on my mobile. My honest oppinion, this author is one of the BEST fanfic writers I ever saw and should definitely keep writing (maybe something original in the near future?) Gonna mark this as one of my favorites and move on to reading his new fic.