First of all I just want to say thank you for the effort you put into writing this but I can only say this book is in my top ten reads and I have read a lot of books on webnovel I'm going to read your marvel book too please keep it up God bless you man đ¤˛đ˝
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This is best review I have ever given to any books. The book is simply AMAAAAZING. Its one of those few books which makes me want to re-read again and again. So far I have no corrections to tell to the author.
It's an amazing story because everything flows so we'll and the characters are actually like able,the main character is kind but he actually cares about his family and is ruthless to his enemies, my biggest draw to this novel is the character development because it feels so satisfying and keeps me attached to the story..its also not harem what else do I have to say.
pretty good story so far(even though its only 18 chps). i really wanna give a good review and stuff but i don't have a way with words. good job author, hope you fun writing this story and hopefully u take ur time. Aloha from Hawaii
I really like the story so far. It has a lot of potential, and looking forward to how the story will play out.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I'm just gonna say this. This seems like a great story. And I'm really hoping to see Grandpa somewhere in the mid for a slight paragraph or like in the endgame. Also
your work is always good so here's a 5 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Amazing, i don't have enough words to describe it! This is the best HP fanfic i have read now, it shall be gold standard for other fanfics!!
What else can i say its mister immortal
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Well, this story overwhelmed me and felt bored at the point when i finished reading 200 chapters. It's because there's too much talk about muggle business and politics, and it bored me to the point where I forgot the part of the story about the wizarding world because the story about the wizarding world seemed to be just an interlude to the story. Compared to reading a fanfic about the wizarding world of Harry Potter, I feel like reading a story about a little genius who manages a government and become a great businessman too.
Does the mc ever become a Professor at Hogwarts? Does the mc ever become a Professor at Hogwarts? Does the mc ever become a Professor at Hogwarts? Does the mc ever become a Professor at Hogwarts?
I thank the monke god for this masterpiece!!! . . . .
Honestly, I'm amazed by quality of this fic. Characters are not bland and they are, for god sake, GROWING AND DEVELOPING. also, author did a really good job on historical facts on both real world and HP. My personal top3 novel I've ever read, along with release that witch and 3 days of happiness. Im really enjoying this work and after its done I'll go for other works of this author
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One of the best there is. Your novels are always the best. I hope you continue writing. I love this story and always will. Thank you for the great work you put in this story
Best story ever.... what a read.... definitely worth following....[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Seeing as we are nearing the end I decided to write a review on this. As always, the author delivered a well written, well develped awesome story that had me hooked and WOULD NOT LET GO!!!! First of all, the characters: Really great characters and character development (Magnus, Adam, Grace, Emma, Ragnar, Severus and many more, I liked them all) The story: Simply GREAT! A mix of HP with kingdom building and just the right amount of violence. I wanted to keep this concise and straight to the point as I honestly could right a proper review, but don't have the time and I suck at writing on my mobile. My honest oppinion, this author is one of the BEST fanfic writers I ever saw and should definitely keep writing (maybe something original in the near future?) Gonna mark this as one of my favorites and move on to reading his new fic.
This is one of the most enjoyable novels I've read to date; it has amazing character development, a shift from weak to strong, and romance ( not too much). This is a story that I believe you will enjoy reading.