Hangry Potter

Really good chapter and the story. The pace of update is also good. Overall a really good story. Keep updating please. Really good chapter and the story. The pace of update is also good. Overall a really good story. Keep updating please.

Interesting take on Harry Potter fanfic however why does he care so much about the Grangers? I think he didn't even meet Hermione yet? I don't see how random muggle-born family could benefit him and the excuse you used doesn't make sense. So yeah that really takes away from mc personality so far. Also perhaps have pov of other people such as Dumbledore and how they react to the new situations that mc caused because I don't see any reactions for the mc actions and how much he ruined the canon.