KrisVFX
it's ok. it has a lot of flaws. The character development is too forced, I understand the author wanted to give the MC a tragic backstory but making everyone hate him for no reason at all just made it stupid and not realistic. Then all of a sudden he has a sister that came from nowhere. I don't understand why he's so obsessed with rei and Hana. Rei was just kind to him, Hana is his childhood friend was he expecting her to be with him just for that. author really need to develop the characters better
I would say that I really like this novel, but I cannot do it for one reason, namely 18+ scenes, or, to be more precise, the lack of such in MC, it's just terribly uncomfortable for me to read the moments in which the MC observes other characters doing ***. Someone can say that MC is simply not interested in ***, but why then does the author poke these moments in our faces so clearly? The most unpleasant thing is that the author not only mentions the *** scenes, but partially details them, which makes these moments even more unreadable. And here you cannot use the excuse that this is only the beginning of the novel, since I am writing this comment at the time of the release of Chapter 75. Initially, I started reading this novel because of the harem and 18+ tags, but so far I have not seen any correspondence to these tags in this novel, except perhaps ntr. This novel has pretty good grammar and interesting character development, but I can't give 5 stars due to the above listed shortcomings.
This dude watched all the anime and cultivation bullshit and copied all that. Trash mc for 24 chapters after getting all the power still wasting time in a underground city or something being an f rank hunter. Mc says he is not going to spare anyone he will be ruthless but don't kill any humans of course when he is not in af mood or some shit. Author made mc as pathetic as he could so people can feel sympathy or something for him but whole story is about how pathetic he is.
I gotta say the story is well handled once You get past the NTR(honestly hope there isnt more), but how the author makes use of it for character development for the MC’s future relationships is amazing P.s hope Lauren and Hanna get what they deserve and nothing better happen to his sister. And plz update more
I enjoyed this book a lot. I feel this is a must read. The characters were well developed to the point that I was able to feel their pain and joys. I look forward to the next book to see how they are going to resolve their feeling for each other. I also am looking to see how the sister will play a role in this story.
We need him to start becoming more dominant please stop making him a cuck person because it basically needs to be solved and is getting tiresome so just make him,find his sister and mom and ignore other people this sounds better and more reasonable than continuing this feeding his rage path because he get betrayed just make him badass that's all okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
The novel is pretty decent but its not for me, mc gets cucked and tbh hes looking more like a side character to me. *sigh* i dont really know where this is going but im not really interested in reading furthur. Im not saying this is a bad novel by all means i think this has potential but this isnt for me.