A Green Bird
author is quite flagrant about the word count. regularly duplicates paragraphs(sometimes up to 3 per chapter), finds ways to repeat info of before & after upgrade. so getting passed these things the story is very well written and enjoyable, which makes the word count thing even more so frustrating to be honest.
my guess of how tiers(strength/item/skill/building) work were black iron, green bronze, white silver, yellow gold, white platinum, diamond, extraordinary, epic, legendary, mythical. quality of conventional soldier/building is divided into basic, beginner, intermediate, advanced, special, kingdom, empire, vine kingdom, high/scarlet. the scale of the minerals is divided into miniature, small, medium, large, extraordinary, epic, legendary, and mythical. let me know what you guys think?
The speed at which the character develops is good enough, it's fast but not fast-fast. I felt 'patriotism' but not a lot like some other works out there that I've read.Also, the writing wasn't clean. There are clearly some aspects where the MC got this with this effect but then it was forgotten or even changed, maybe the author forgot about them and was too lazy to check? It's not a big deal though. Another thing is that, stop being too comprehensive about the dropped loots, you can do better and I strongly believe that. The dropped loots take a lot more work counts that the story sometimes where I just skip them cause they are repetitive anyway. You can just highlight/mention some of the most unique gains he'll get so that you can fit more details in one chapter.And just a suggestion, why not make talents with similar effects fuse? Enhancing similar traits between talents and keeping other effects and optimizing them according to the base talents will work out well in my opinion in this kind of setting.Anyway, I enjoy reading this.
This is not a story. This is a wish fulfillment report of someone who played an MMO and lost so bad that they wrote a report where everything is going well for them. MC is bland af. Meant to only be a blank slate for readers to slot themselves in Everything is reported intellectually monotonous. Even if there are ”human reactions” from the chats, it seems lifeless. Good world building so far though. Chapter 33 and i havent noticed any preset rules being violated yet.
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Probably one of the best you can find for these "Global/Worldwide" transmigration stuff, it's overall not bad although mc a lil op compared to his race. Anyway here's a recipe for cake: 6 tablespoons unsalted butter, plus more for greasing the pan 2 cups all-purpose flour, plus more for dusting the pan 2 teaspoons baking powder 2 teaspoons baking soda 1 teaspoon kosher salt 2 cups sugar 2 cups water 4 ounces unsweetened chocolate, chopped 1 teaspoon pure vanilla extract 2 eggs, lightly beaten Chocolate Frosting