Reviews of Gacha Sovereign

this is literally one of the shittiest books I have ever read a total piece of shit I don't know why there are peoples even reading this crap

dude lm disappointed reading this at the start the idea of the novel are interesting but after a few chapter it become really ****ty doesn't make sense how stupid the enemies is a mere baron child dare to kill a grand Duke child like tf man does status doesn't mean anything in the dang kingdom irl if you are just a normal person would you try to kill someone of a higher status than you are?

this novel would be SOOOOO much better if the grammar was fixed. that is the fatal flaw in this novel. the world itself seems really interesting and original-ish

Mc is dumb and get manhandled a lot is so annoying mc also has obbessions being helpfull and **** that lead to dumb troubles. Would not recommend this. unbelievable the lack of improvemt of the author

Couldn’t make it past chapter 30 too much cliche for me If you don’t want to see remake of cliche isekai manga don’t read it Mc is the typical useless Mc with backstabbing friend and gold digger girlfriend

No brains enemy at every corner, No brains enemy at every corner, No brains enemy at every corner, important things need to say thrice, half brain mc.

Writing quality: uhh, well what to say, the grammar isnt good, even for webnovel standards, its not good, i checked out the last chapter too. which is like 400 something, uhh, its not good, after 400 smth chapters to not evolve and maybe even degrade a little from chap 1. its kinda lame. Character design: well, who doesnt love cardboard boxes ? Story development: is like any other webnovel isekai story, guy is boolied, check, guy is loser, check, girlfriend left cuz he loza, check, he gets a weird magic circle under him, check. yo author if you perhaps reading this, get some courage and read the reviews and discuss your shortcomings. you might say that you want a slow pace for developing the character but im thinking that seems more like an excuse instead of a valid reason for your character development. that the main character, or any in fact, is as smart as the author, and many people complain that the mc is dumb and really immature, and foolish, im not sure what to say but he does seem a bit immature for his age, inferiority complex doesnt mean he isnt smart, it means he lacks self confidence. and that comes from him seeing the discrimination his father and mother show towards him. listen, as a person when you go trough a rough time you tend to get wiser, not the other way around. Don't make the excuse of inferiority complex and slow pacing, for the fact that you are unable to make a cohesive main character, the mc is 16 and some people say he did some really stupid things, for a 16 year old to do such stupid stuff, you gotta be really ignorant or dense of the world you are living in. but he isnt, because he noticed his parents dont love him, that he is a trash, and that his sister is much more talented, if he were to be truly dense he wouldnt have noticed it. and instead would have just lived his life lazily or much more idly, without putting in any effort. for anything and live by the words of his parents.

Honestly, the grammar is really not good. Reading poor grammar continuously leaves a bad taste in the mouth. The world building is almost non existent. Character design is also not good; this is because the side characters get nothing and you feel nothing for the MC. His design is rushed and there isn't much introspection or the grammar when it does happen is so bad, that you feel nothing. I'd say the only thing good is that the story progresses quite well. There isn't a lot of filler like walking from location to location.

The novel is really good and the ending is amazing.For the reader who are bored it may not be that good cause in early chapter there is so many grammar problem and always mistake MC name😂. And the its have many clichè and drama part in the early chapter too. BUT REMEMBER its only in the lower world arc that have problem like this. When the MC in the upper world it become really interesting and i don't want to spoiler what is good,so read to know what is so good about it. Please give it a try even if you hate the early chap.

So the MC turns himself into a cuck, whether you take my warning or not is up to you but this is basically NTR. 140 140 140 140 140..................................

Well.. Ehem, guess ill start from the top: Writing Quality: very bad to the point it's werid to see a paragraph without grammatical mistakes. On second thought i don't want to write a too detailed review for this story what i'm sure of is its a bad and cheap execution.

First time I'm leaving negative review. The MC is made of carton. It's plain, usable by everyone around him no ba**s guy. 40ch - reading this were disgusting and left a bad taste. Only hopes for some better development allowed me to hold on. Now I'm done, fed up with this. Every action of MC and others around him just makes you frustrated. Maybe i will return to this novel some day, but i doubt it.

This novel could've been so much better. The characters all had unique personalities and frankly, I enjoyed the first 500 chapters. The mc started out terribly but there was a reason for this, And eventually he managed to break out of his shell and grow as a person. BUT. #1). Why is the mc trying so hard to differentiate between the current him and him from his previous life? I mean, it's fine if he wants to do that, but EVERYTHING he has is literally from his previous life. He accepted his women from his previous life. He accepted the help of the 'system' which is also a woman from his previous life. He accepts and uses the inheritance that he left for himself from his previous life. Yet everytime his previous life is mentioned, or he thinks about it he goes back to acting like the same indecisive wuss he was at the start of the novel. He keeps saying "I am me, and he is him" he never thinks about it that both are him. Frankly I hate this part of the mc. If he doesn't want to accept that he's someone reincarnated, then why accept the boons that come with it? He literally achieved nothing on his own, everything he achieved throughout the novel was handed to him by the 'system'. He kept getting the benefits of his previous life and accepting them, but trying hard to not accept anything about his previous life. What makes it worse is that he wasn't actually a bad person in his previous life, so acknowledging the fact that he was reincarnated wouldn't harm him. It's not like he's going to tell the whole world that he's reincarnated. 2). At about chapter 500 it became boring and repetitive. It went like this(reach a high level for his current area, move to an area with stronger people, create a secret base, send the others to go kill monsters to level up, he cultivates, reaches a high enough level, somehow has some issue that he needs to handle, so they scheme till it's time to handle it, they handle it then go back to hiding). Just rinse and repeat. 3). Even with all his character development, the mc was still not very enjoyable to read, even excluding my first reason up above. Watching the mc work hard and all that, yeah it wasn't bad. The problem though was the author tried too hard to make the mc seem like someone gentle and loving. To the point where the dynamic between 'ruthless and loving mc' was destroyed. With the mc, when he's showing his gentle side, he literally acted like a wuss, always crying over something. The author overdid that part IMO. The ruthless part was alright though. That was perfect.

MC has no character. there are useless conversations. He doesn't understand that he is throwing himself in pot of fire. sudden info dump. Basically not so good

Improve your English writing skills. I can't really best describe this feeling but i will still say it. The story gets boring the more i read and it becomes a chore once i pass chapter 30. Please improve your overall story.

I don’t like the development of the Story. The MC could make a living as an adventure slowly building up his power. But no, the author wants him to get played by people with power. He meets some dukes daughter and lives under the duke after that when the duke finds out that MC has a rare magic element. Also his Gacha cannot give him information he needs. So, he has to rely on others. The story could gav developed in anither way. The MC could get somewhat more stronger doing adventuring and make some stories before meeting the Heroin, that would have given him some more mature aura. If not he could have lived on seclusion and then join Adventurers guild. The author also have the tendency of reusing same scenarios continuously to make readers bored of it. Also some cringe stuff. In short the MC getting in touch with the upper Authorities of a country kind of hampers the development of a story. The author did try to send him in an Academy to fix it but things didn’t just work out. The MC is also very silly and have low mental fortitude. I get what author wants, some people just have that kind of character but what about the characters around him? No character of his age around him has no maturity to speak of, not even any shed of common sense; how can this even be possible? In short read it if you don’t have anything else to read. It's true I only read like untill chap 60s but It's really hard to continue after this. And so the Bad review.

Idk how this has 4+ stars. Overall poor story, characters without any character design and unreadable story that was translated by a 5-year old.

The same as always, like the typical Chinese novels that is translated to English. I wonder this is Chinese views on the world? Do they fucking lookdown on poor? If no is poor no one is rich either and if no one is poor there will be no workers. Wtf plot is lame as ****. I thought this is good because of the reviews but damn, I think the reviewers are bot that is created to make the novel 's rating never fall under the 3 star category. A fucking shitty novel. It will be interesting if my comment is gone. heheheh.... I'm sorry to say but damn, the novel sucks. (English is not my main language)

A lot of potential with world building, destroyed by awfuly bad grammar worse than lmtl. Characters are two-dimensional, nothing of note here with females behaving like in worst xianxia novels, mainly having gold digger roles. Having only thrash females in the world of magic is so dissapointing, even if they supposedly have some grand role like Saintess, it's still awfuly downgrading.MC could only be described as Beta with a wuss personality even after hundreds of so chapters. After novel went premium with grammar beffiting A2 level of English, i decided to drop and write this review for further reference. I am interested if it gets deleted later.

The story overall is messy but ok. It’s not the best thing to read because the whole thing is written in broken english and it’s just hard to read and keep up with what’s going on. The things that are happening are a total mess and the main character doesn’t know what’s going on in his head. It was ok but somewhere author decides to add a harem character with no background that just breakes all the good romance in the story and is totally useless character with either no personality or with really bad made one.