Passingsands
After reading all the chaps available, I can say that it has such rich lore and plot. The story was planned and not just writing random plots just to write. The thing is, story quality and writing quality passed with passing colors. Dialogues and character interactions were lit too. No need to feel reserved, binge read this work and you will see [img=recommend]
i have read only 6 chapters, i will be honest with this review . thia author has a goor writing style,if you like japanese methology or even you are interested in japanese culture , movies , animes, then this novel is for you . the story follows the path of alex an archaeology students who went to japan for study and things went wrong after that... this story has a lot of potential and i liked the permise of thjs story
This kind of books just pulls you in from chapter one. I actually read through the prologue without skipping a paragraph. The author is just too good a narrator and has nice control over description. The characters are okay as well, they're structured to compliment each other, and the anime references reels readers in. Good job Author-San.
This book is a breath of fresh air on this site. The writing is simply ‘overkill’- with the words, structure, descriptions capable of pulling you into the world of its own. Seriously, you will find very few books here that can match the magical writing of this piece of art. As for the story development, I cant say much as the book is till in its infancy. Even though you can’t judge a book by its cover, you can definitely do it by its first chapters. All I can say that the story is quite unique- different from most of the books here- with a huge potential. The characters are three dimensional with their own personalities, motives and goals. As for the world building, the author did an awesome job. Just the first few chapters will let you know that the author had done her research- maybe even to the point of visiting some sites in the book. So, stop reading reviews and start reading the book. And all the best to you, author.
Where do I even begin? The story has a superb writing style; something most other authors will never be able to reach in their lifetime. The characters are very much lifelike, in fact so much so, that it does feel like the author truly does live in Japan. I have the utmost respect for the ideas and concepts the writer uses to paint an otherworldly picture. They employ sentence structures, which highly underline the colourful world the story takes place in. More than anything, however, do I look forward to the next chapter of the story. Simply, because I have to know how the story continues.
The start is very interesting. Old Japanese history about Yayoi period, Yamatai Kingdom (even whether it was in Nara and Northern Kyushu) and then the following is old Japanese mythology (Yamata-no-Orochi and Hiikawa) . Looks like a lot of research went into the story. I will give it a 5 because it is very interesting to see where the story goes. Not the usual eastern fantasy with incorrect details.