Tinalynge
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. This novel is amongst my newest adventures. I have been writing cultivqation novels for many years, and i began writing romance novels a year ago. However I never tried merging my two passions together before this year, and what came out of it was Forsaken Immortals. This story is about fighting for what you believe in. It is about a woman who is strong and independant and who wishes to rely on her own strength to get revenge, however she gets dragged into numerous troubles, and gets entangled by her newly wed husband. I am currently writing quite a few novels, and amongst them is the complete series Blue Phoenix (Also on this site and completely updated), Overthrowing Fate (also on this site, and completely updated) Condemning the Heavens (Also on this site, ongoing) and a few romance novels.
This novel is amazing. Author, you have done a great job. The pacing, scenes, chemistry between leads, and the swift yet decisive actions... everything is depicted so well. Every chapter was satisfying, yet left me hanging with the anticipation of what would happen next. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Thank you for writing this. :-)
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I'm not in love with the story but I do like what I'm reading so far even though the ML's immediate acceptance and decision seem to shock me he's still likable. This is a transmigration but its within a different time frame of a soul that was taken advantage. The fact that this information was revealed very early to both leads makes it unique and yet the ML has loyal comrades with questionable intentions. I like the FL so far and there is a mystery to who her predecessor was and the reasons for her enemies actions. The story will stay in my library for now. ' However, I wish the author lessen the looks component of the leads as a reader I am aware that they look beyond amazing but it does not need to get repeated as its unnecessary and usually feels like a filler for something if there is nothing to really say. Its the same with the admiration of the other characters of the leads in a way its speaks to vanity and arrogance. It would be nice to just simply be appreciated without fan fare. Some of the content also has the typical trope to which my sincere advice would be be orginal as much as possible you'll be surprised that there are people who likes that, I'm one of them. Take care
Simply an outstanding book, this book is akin to a breath of crispy, fresh air. I have read plenty of the cliche reincarnation/transmigration/ugly rock into a polished diamond books. However, none have seemed to grasp the slow pacing, the gradual build-up between characters and their characters relationships, including a way to avenge without making it appear forced or another cliche. This is, by far, one of the best novels I have encountered in this app and I hope to read more of this amazing work when it updates for the normal readers. Thank you for this work of fresh air on a hot, summer day. I hope you, the author, will continue to make mostly non-cliche stories where no character seems fake nor the writing appearing forced. This story flowed unlike most I have read and I can't give any higher praise than this.
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After finishing the book, I must say I quite enjoyed it. The characters are lovable and funny, a witty FL, a shameless ML, a couple of adorable 'children', and a few noteworthy side characters that I hope will make a comeback in the following novels. The pacing of the action is quite good, didn't feel rushed or dragged on, although some events are left to be finished in the future, I hope. I would have preferred to have a bit more fluffy and combat scenes, and less visits to that shopping pavilion, but it doesn't detract from the overall story. Grammar wise the book was fine, barely saw any mistakes, and it was neatly formatted, a pleasant read overall. In the end, I don't think there's much left to be said without going into spoilers. It was a good first book, and I hope the rest of the series follows through.