Reviews of Flower On The Ash
Flower On The Ash
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Nice plot and interesting to read. I love CEO and romance stories. So far so great. Would like to read more from you. Good luck author 💞💞😊😊
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The pacing of the story is good. There is a clear and defined relationship between the different characters. Notes to the author: There are several grammatical issues, and jumps from an action or moment to an internal dialogue within the same sentence and it can be throw the reader out of the story. The first chapter could use some love to be a little more attention grabbing. This story is very much like all the rest out there with this set up, I recommend finding something to make it unique among the rest and introducing it early.
The story, although seems fast-paced, would definitely be a wonderful read for whoever is into these kinds of novel plots. At first, the author had me feeling very bad for the main character, but the way all the events and everything in general sped up so quickly like that kind of threw me off. This would definitely become an amazing novel if there was some more illustration and more spread-out events. Otherwise, keep up the great work :)
I love stories that start off like this. Character design was great. They have much depth. I can see them growing into very active and vivid characters. I would like to see a little more descriptive words for their features however. The flow of the chapters were very good. It didn’t jump around and we also got to read the ML side of the story, which is stellar. At times the author does skip from 1st and 3rd point of view and there are a few word errors but it was not enough to pull me from my immersion. Very good start!
I just finished reading your novel (I mean not alll the chapters but after reading 10+ chapters) and I must say, your storytelling skills are truly remarkable. The way you were able to captivate me from beginning to end had me eagerly turning page after page, completely absorbed in the world you created. Your attention to detail and the way you intricately woven the plot together left me in awe.
