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This first person narration gives me chills in the spine. A vivid description on the character's voice and feelings. I'm impressed! The author has a good grasp on the language despite it's not the main dialect there in the the country. Gandang Gabi Bayan! oh I forgot, it closed right? by the way...I am from review swap
It's a really interesting and capturing plot. I love how the first chapter is very emotion driven and is filled with angst which is really fun! I noticed a few error in tenses but as a fellow author I get it lol, we make mistakes. Overall it's very interesting good luck![img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It has just a few chapters but it already got me hooked to want to read more. Though there are very minimal grammatical errors but it didn't hinder much the story. The character development and intro is also good but you can fleshen it more. Overall this story has great potential! Kudos to the author! Keep it up! Highly recommended to those who love reincarnation/ rebirth stories!