The author is an evil genius who led me to believe this was going to be a typical harem story only to finish up with this outrageously great story. Despite appearances, the story's concept is carried out in a very unique manner, leaving me and many others unable to put it down. The characters have been fleshed out, and their interactions are logical. While the main character is the focus, the other characters and the setting as a whole serve a role. Despite my appreciation, I will not pretend that this is a perfect story, nor do I believe that it is appropriate for everyone. Nonetheless, I've thoroughly enjoyed this narrative thus far, and the only criticism I have is for the grammar and spacing. Otherwise, great potential!
Apart from minor grammatical errors that are even inconspicuous,this book has all the qualities of a great novel. The action scenes are unlike the lazy ones you see all around here. The action scenes are perfect. The characters are likable (well,those who need to be) and the updating stability is awesome. I have no regrets for adding this to my library.
A good book by all standards. Started pretty well and there's love where love should be and hate where it should be. Of course,I'm talking about the mc and his mother as well as his dreaded stepfather, "Dred". I haven't finished everything so far but this work is solid enough to make me want to review.
So far so good, but the writing quality… It’s actually terrible. But the update stability so far is absolutely amazing! Story Development is decent so far, I’ll give it a 4, Chara Design seems good so far but I haven’t read that much so I won’t comment on it, world background is actually real good with info dumps that don’t really feel like info dumps but we’re learning a lot about the story TL;DR: Great story with bad grammar, but it’s easily fixable