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Fighting Mate

Monachre

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Monachre
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Hello, the author here. I would like to point things to look forward on my novel. Good Stuff: > I will do my best as an author to create decent chapters that fit your taste. > You can chat with me anytime in discord if you have a suggestion regarding the novel. (You can put it in the comments too). Bad Stuff: > The 2nd until 30th chapters are still in 1st person pov and I notice some readers are liking it so I decided to not changed it. > Expect grammar mistakes. I mostly mixed up he/she, him/his/her but I'm trying to fix it up. (Thanks to the readers who helped out.) > This book is a slow-burn one and sometimes the flow of the story changes. > There are also personality inconsistencies of the characters depending on the situation especially if they experience harsh events. (Sometimes, it also depends on my mood T_T) > I have planned the ending but my mind changes from time to time so right now, I'm writing without an ending in mind and would just go with the flow. So I am as clueless as you are but I hoped you can help me with great ideas to satisfy you, readers. (We start together, we end together). > There are some chapters that I stretched too much and perceived as boring. (My mind sometimes stopped functioning). > This novel is about werewolves but there are also changes of plot in the volumes. New plots that I added to add some spice. > There are also a couple of male leads. (I like hawt men surrounding my MC) but it's not Harem. > My MC has multiple sides, so expect that her attitude and mindset are not always the same and sometimes would conflict with her original self. Warnings: > Before reading this novel, please prepare yourself to blur the reality and enter the world of the MC. > Grab a cushion to punch if you're angry or pissed. > A box of tissue if you wanna cry. > Please prepare your feeling for a roller coaster of emotions that may make you drop this novel but give it a chance. (Please don't leave me). Thank You!

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BRPever
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Interesting. The writing is simple and somewhat easy to understand, comprehend, and imagine. Some sentences are long and take a lot of breath to read... but not bad and good overall. The updates are stable... quality is good The development is smooth, there is hardly anything to complain about there. Not too fast or slow. The character's action is described well so I think I am satisfied there The world is described well too... we are able to imagine stuff easily so in a way I am satisfied. Overall a good read, I recommend it.

nikky13
nikky13Lv3nikky13

I thought I would drop this book after reading the first chapter but the plot and twist of the story got me already hooked. its a nice book to read and I love the story line.

pelzy
pelzyLv4pelzy

I binged the whole book, well the free parts and although there are some grammar errors here and there, I love the book. So, facts: Nathan is a b***ard F**k Lily Good luck to Sha and Axel.

Drapetomaniac12
Drapetomaniac12Lv4Drapetomaniac12

Nice story you have here. Writing style is good too. Didn't find grammatical errors as such. Although the synopsis has one error so do edit that. Good job.Keep writing!

Moon_Lee_6633
Moon_Lee_6633Lv1Moon_Lee_6633

I love it, the storyline is amazing, explaining the transition of every character is great. I really look forward to other projects from you. keep up the good work.

hasvu
hasvuLv6hasvu

This author is a good writer. I like reading stories with a female lead. This book has heartbreak, redemption, betrayal and a few others that I can't think of. It will keep you on the edge of your seat or bed as you don't realize your getting closer to the end of the chapter with questions. It has happened to me too many times. Lol. Please excuse the grammar from the author. She's trying to go back and fix those chapters. I'm a long supporter of this book and other books that I find hidden away on webnovel.

Malignant
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devil_spirit
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MidnightOtter
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As a fan of fantasy romance with a bit of myth, this novel has me hooked. The story plot line is marvellous... absolutely thrilling and stunning. Very well written Author! Also have to say that this has brought me on a huge emotional roller-coaster, anger, hate, pain, love, happy, sad, dark depression (haha). Overall, it is a marvellous novel. Keep it up Author!!!

YennuiXiel
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Hi there monachre! i super like your storyy but sad to say i didn't read that much because i didnt have that much time but don't worry I love your story so I will definitely spare some time to continue reading it uwwuuu Godbless

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Parisian_Moon
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Uwu the character is so adorable like the reader. I had a smile on my face reading it. The narration was simple and it was easy to understand. Keep up the good work, bb

_Daulla
_DaullaLv3_Daulla

It's a nice story and I am already hooked. I love the storyline, please give more chapters.....Please don't middle drop it.I want to follow this book this the end............All the best

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D_Marvel_2943
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Firstly, I love your first person presentation of your MC, it made your story look unique. Nice idea building of your own version of werewolves. Nice development and storyline. Your novel should be going into recommendations now, because it's too nice to be kept hidden. Nice job.