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Reviews of Fight for the throne (THE MORNING STAR 一揽子清单)

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Fight for the throne (THE MORNING STAR 一揽子清单)

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Luv_Freek
Luv_FreekLv1Luv_Freek

I love the story lines and the character, the character I really love is Zack. The only thing that was off was just the absence of the use of capital letters at the sentence beginning. Apart from that, it was a great story. Please keep updating

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lo_rezi
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shameless author here 🤭 this is actually my first book ever and may have a lot of grammatical mistakes which have tried correcting, I'll ask to give it a try if you want but if you don't 👇

KidOO
KidOOLv2KidOO

Good. An evocative story, with straightforward language. very much deserves to stay on the reading list. Excited for the author... Hopefully the hard work won't be in vain

DonDenis
DonDenisLv2DonDenis

The story's been brilliant so far, good world building and nice pacing to it. It's also structurally okay. I'm hoping the author is able to keep up the good work and even improve further. Good work author!

Leo2410
Leo2410Lv1Leo2410

Wow that's a well developed story. Even I write do check it out

FIAMMA01
FIAMMA01Lv1FIAMMA01

It starts off with an interesting pemise and builds up to the mystery surrounding lucy and her mother. The story even has magical elements that I didn't expect to see at all, so this should be pretty interesting........try using more dialoue and consistently sticking to one perspective to enhance your flow.

immortal_0830
immortal_0830Lv3immortal_0830

The story is good, word building is good, grammar and spelling, everything is good

Rosewater15
Rosewater15Lv2Rosewater15

I feel like the main downside to this story is the writing quality. Some words seem off because the characters are screaming/shouting them but they are lowercase, and it kinda makes the scene confusing, but other than that, this book is really good! I like the premise and other than grammar it seems pretty well written. I'm not sure if it's finished cos the last chapter was updated a year ago but good job!

dkantol
dkantolLv3dkantol

Really good book,am eagerly waiting for the next chapters.