Brother Mahua
Author tried to portray the MC as a kind person, but his actions are anything but! He steals the good fortune of anyone around him. Selfish, greedy, and never satisfied with anything! What the novel shows you and what it tells are you are completely different, and makes me suspect that later on it'll devolve into the typical faceslapping fest.
Hope this gets picked! If anyone finds the raw please drop it below. I don’t think i’ve read a novel with the narrative editor cheat that i’ve been satisfied with, but this summary has me hopeful the author doesn’t nerf it too hard. The sword bit at the end is a little red flag, but it probably won’t be the main weapon.
I don't know where to begin, disappointed so much potential but the Author just didn't care much I mean why give the mc so much talent if his not going to used it, almost all increased of strength is because of external help either he use pills or magical powders I won't mind if he use it one or two times but everysingle time why does he even have a heavenly spiritual root and a supreme physique for and let's not forget how dumb the mc is, I'll just stop here caused it's just a wasted potential.
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I have already written a review for this whole batch and ranked them by themselves, however this will just be a ranking for all novels in 1 review. This will be copied to all novels on this batch so don't worry. 1) Pet Simulator 2) Goddess Helps Me Simulate Cultivation 3) Maximum Comprehension: Taking Care of Swords In A Sword Pavilion 4) My Genes Can Evolve Limitlessly 5) Fantasy: I Became Invincible By Editing Narratives 6) Aiding My Queen With My System This isn't an opinion this is a fact. Kekekekek
one it's a copy novel so point for something new two this more like the first rough draft people make before starting writing a novel as it has a lot,he ll lot of inconsistencies in every character three the cheat is just super op on the lvl of wish fulfilment novels but still it's ok but the mc is idiot when using it even a 3th Grader would would call him dumb four a few other reasons are already mentioned by different reviews
Average book with op mc telling himself he’s the good guy but really is the worst of al them. None of the characters are written well they are all very on dimensional. The worst offense is that of the 22 days that have occurred this month of september chapters have been uploaded on 3 of them. The only redeeming quality is that it is legible.
he can edit but he only did it 4 times he still can edit about 5 more times then he made himself with much potential yet he always goes after other's opportunities that make his talent pointless as if it's only an excuse for the auther to make him powerful cultivation system is messed up, every time he talk about strength he must make feel wrong for example at 7th level divine sea realm he can fight an illumination realm powerhouse yet when on 1sr illumination realm he can only fight a 3rd level one so author wasted the entire world background like that he wasted 2 edit opportunities makeing an elixir work on an cultivation less than it supposedly be taken for example blood cloud powder that can increase cultivation speed by 10 times but can only be take by divine sea realm or above huh when you edit it it becomes can be take by any realm Remember editing must be logical there's no logic here since a strong medicine can brust with much energy for low levels one's to absorb now then instead of editing elixir data why not find a source to get resources ?? why not try to create opportunities that's much better than stealing other's in which you could use these people as followers thus building a power for himself ??
Interesting concept, but poorly executed. The first major problem is the limits of the narrative editing. Starting out with some sort of unlimited blank check to edit his own talent and potential, the author goes way overboard and rarely uses the narrative editing cheat. Instead the MC goes and reads peoples narratives to steel their opportunities. So the flaws that I see is that the author should have removed the limits on number but instead made much stricter limits on how much a single edit could accomplish. I really dislike when an author names their story about a gimmick and than quickly drops the gimmick.
Translation and updating stability are a 5 everything else is a 3. Right off the bat let’s start with the MC, the MC isnt stupid or dull by any stretch of the imagination. Fairly smart tbh in how he acts. The only issue is that his character as well as everyone else in this novel needs to be fleshed out just a little more. World background is okay. It’s easy to understand but not amazing in any aspect. All around a decent book to pass the time with and has the chance to be a diamond in the rough provided the author works hard to improve.