Family Secrets

Marvelous! All the chapters available for free have enchanted me. I liked the way the story flows. Good work! I will wait for more chapters!

I love the flow of the story. Amazing writing style, the author has put efforts into word building. The story does build excitement, very intriguing, love the characters as well. Keep going! All the best!

Damm this is a good story. I love that the main character has that much of a mess up life dad not there mother not there and she doesn't even care at all. Well her father a work, but i very much enjoyed the story and will be recommending this to any one who need i good read[img=recommend]

Love the mystery from the synopsis. It's hard to know the actual characteristics of the character which makes it even more fun to read. Keep. Up with a good job

I love the story line and how the author describes the female leads feelings. I love the love hate relationship between Jax and Vaugan and I look forward to how far their relationship will go

This is quite an interesting story. The introductions of the characters gives us a nice look into the complex characters we'll be reading about. I find all these characters to be quite intriguing as well as the plot. Good job author.

It is also a highly recommended novel for everyone, and I like how the author describes the character and the flow of the story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Beautiful synopsis and even more beautiful beginning. Your writing style is legit crazy! I mean it blew my mind. Wow. Am impressed. The mystery of the unknown, the story development and what not are on point. Kudos.!

10/10 would highly recommend. the story plot is amazing and the way the characters are moving in with the flow of he story. the author's imagination is exceptional. keep up the good work!

The sypnosis compelled me to want to know those secrets, I love how the story develops, the author's use of the word, grammar is splendid. Do update more Author, can't wait for more chapters

Nice synopsis and captivating too. After reading it, I knew it was one I couldn't afford to miss reading and believe me when I say I was not disappointed. The book has everything a good book should contain and I can't wait to read more. Kudos author,keep it up.

It's quite interesting synopsis and it intrigued me to read further...The author has done a really splendid job...The choice of words & writing style is remarkable...I liked how the author developed the story in each chapter...Highly recommended book...Excellent work, Author! Kudos!

The author's a genius! How come you think of those unique names? Unique names, unique characters, unique story. I like the development of the story, as well as the character design. I give it a 5 out of 5! Keep on writing! :)

absouletely impressed by the work, it is lovely to see such a talented person, the novel is very well written, and more than you can think off, the novel has equal turns and twists! keep it up, author!!

I must admit, I'm getting some "Money Heist" vibes from just reading the first chapter! This is an excellent work of literature imo, and would highly recommend it to anyone that's into the genre 👍👏👏👏

One word... **MAGNIFICENT** I would've loved to gift this book but I don't have much apart from power stones. Am so glad the book is completed, I can read to the end❤❤

OMG THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I HAVE ENCOUNTER THIS KIND OF STORY IT IS SO GOOD THAT I WANT TO KEEP ON READING IT UNTIL THE END! THE PLOTS IS SO WONDERFUL KEEP WRITING AUTHOR!!

Multiple identities .. Nice. I just know that the plot will work out perfectly well. It's a good story, plus, it is written very well.. So, kudos to the author!! [img=update][img=recommend]

All the characters are real thing I guess. Well, the mistry and thriller vibe is on it's level. The more you read the more you go into it. Just start reading and go into it. It's really awesome.

The world's background caught my attention right from the beginning. I was interested to see the life of a hitman's family. The MC is a sniping prodigy that doesn't require a spotter's help to kill her targets from long distance. If that doesn't sound prodigious, I don't know what would. 😁 The heist mission with her team were so cool to read. The only thing that always killed to mood for me was how she always pumped into a human wall (3x in 8 chapters), some university jock, which made me question her instincts as a hitman many times. There were some instances where MC's morals were questioned, for example, when she was upset that she killed a wrong target, an innocent person. Mind me, it wasn't her first kill. It made me think that she was not suited to be an assassin for hire, and that she should have fought against her family for a special ops or a military career instead. Who knows... she wanted her father's aknowledgment, so maybe she'll have some dark character development, and would become colder and colder as times goes be. Or maybe the author wanted to make her more likeable? Didn't work on me. I don't know...a 'good' assasin doesn't ring a good bell in my ears. Maybe my impression of killers for hire are just that twisted.😂 For a dark background, her every day seems pretty normal. She goes to school like everyone else, has friends and enemies, goes to parties and etcetera. Her relationship with her father is a bit strained. Her father wants to make up for his constant absence. Not the most overbearing and controlling man out there, the MC didn't fear him much and could even talk back without being punished. I concluded that he is not such a bad dad. Sometimes her thoughts blended with the rest of the text, so one could mistake it and assume that it was a fourth wall break. 😁 The various relationship with different characters are interesting enough to make you read more and try find out the reason behind some of their actions. Overall, good job.