Reviews of Fairy tail and the Abysmal slayer(remake)

Ok, the Author is not a jerk nor an asshole. He doesn't delete my review or tries to justify his point, unlike me sometimes. He actually fixed his mistake, that's very rare as far as I know. GOOD LUCK IN THE FUTURE AUTHOR

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this actually pretty good for a first novel. nothing else to say other than it was good to read new novels and authors. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

You have to stop writing your paragraphs in large chunks all the time. It makes it very hard to follow the story. Make multiple paragraphs and space it out a bit. Atleast a minimum of 3 - 4 lines a paragraph and a maximum of 8 - 9 lines a paragraph.