Reviews of Fading Scars: Scars Of The Past
Fading Scars: Scars Of The Past
CodeyVanilla
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I like the character Athena from this novel. When I started reading it, I couldn't stop. The author describes the scenes so beautifully that you can easily imagine it happening in your mind. Highly recommended!
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Touching story about teenage emotions. The story plot becomes clear right from the start. The motivations of each character are clear too as well as their internal and interpersonal conflicts. Writing wise, simply great. The first person narrative is done correctly, with minimal internal monologues. I did share some humble feedback on dialogues with the author for any future drafts. Definitely an interesting story in the making. Will be following to see what happens to Athena and Aiden. Great job, author!
I applaud the author's strong character voice. Athena's voice is very distinct. I felt the dialogue in some places was a little messy, but it's can be attributed to a charming quirk of the writing style, we are in a teenager's brain after all. the story is fast-paced, but there is a lack of atmospheric descriptions at times that pull me out of the story. in conclusion, I am waiting for the next chapter anxiously!
The plot is very relatable and interesting in its own right. however, the writing could be better. The pacing was decent and most of the time, the writing felt smooth. But then there were the times it didn't. I think there's too much telling, maybe that's just a personal opinion. It's nothing too severe like the purple prose realm but it's hanging by the borders. Hopefully, the author would fix this with an edit.
It's a good job for a new author on Webnovel. There are grammar issues, as the author already said in the first chapter, but nothing to take your mind off the book. Furthermore, it's fairly common in web novels. It's an easy read, nothing complicated. Simple, neat, and fresh. Romance isn't my genre, but it was enjoyable. The tropes are indeed changed and aren't like most of what I've seen. Anyway, keep up the good work! Y.R.
The writing is very smooth, which I enjoyed a lot as it keeps me immersed. I loved how the author handled the character's emotions, as sometimes it can be difficult to portray accurately the turbulence the characters feel, but the author did it well and seemed natural to me. The pacing is well done too, and I really liked it a lot! All the best for the competition!
Love this book. I had to force myself to stop reading. I love the beginning of the book, and the way you introduced the characters. You made me feel each the emotions of each characters. Your story development is top notch. You write really mature. Your characters are unique with the mystifying effects you add to your book, making the readers curious. What happened to her mom that made her cry? Why did her dad use another number to call her? It is worth adding to my library. Watch out for subtle error smainly typographical error. They are hardly noticeable maybe two or three. Your book is 💞🥰🥰
Instantly, the first thing that stands out about this story is its detailing. It puts the reader in some sort of daze which allows them to visualize everything happening. The quality of writing is really impressive. It really grabs the reader's attention from the start. Well done author! I'm cheering you on. I hope more readers flock to this story/novel.
