webnovel
avatar

Reviews of Face-Slapping System

altalt

Face-Slapping System

StiffStick

  • Overall Rate
  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background

Reviews43

LikedNewest
StiffStick
StiffStickAuthorStiffStick

Honest review after 90+ chapters! A lot of people have been thrown off in the first chapter because of the MC's attitude, and especially since he got a green hat, like what the synopsis stated. However, I assure that this only happens in the first chapter. After he got the system, his worldview would slowly change, and his way of handling things would change for the better as well. As long as you can get past the first chapter, I assure you that his attitude shown in the first chapter won't show up again. Now, as English is not my main language, it is subpar compared to others. A lot of readers have also been correcting my mistakes, which I appreciate quite a lot. For updates. I usually upload 1 chapter a day but with bonus chapters obtained from weekly goals, and bonus chapters from sponsors, I would sometimes upload more than 3 chapters in a single day. Story development. As this is a kind of slice of life and wish fulfillment story, the story does not progress very quickly where more than a week will pass after a single chapter. Character design is okay. Although it might not be the best, but I assure you that I sure did my best to make them more alive. World background is also being slowly introduced to avoid info dumps as much as possible. That's all. I hope you give this novel a try! Thank you!

Become a KOL for my discussion channel!

Engage with others on the app, and become a moderator for my discussion channel. Let this be a place for sharing with other fellow bookworms!

avatar
Fenris321
Fenris321Lv14Fenris321

It’s face slapping novel. Seemingly designed to be painfully generic, it does encompasses all the worst parts of the genre. The MC is an insecure brat going on a powertrip, he has a system which gives him everything, and everyone is an autistic narcissist because that’s the only people our MC can “face slap”. If you enjoy the genre then it might tide you over, but it does nothing particularly well and the glacial pace only makes it more difficult to get through (30 shopping chapters in a row).

CHVA2001
CHVA2001Lv4CHVA2001

nice plot and interesting characters and world background

KKH
KKHLv4KKH

A face slapping novel... i know many of you would have already read this type of novel and so did I but still I am enjoying this and you all should also give it a try. story is well written so go for it.

edu_rodeiro
edu_rodeiroLv15edu_rodeiro

good premisse, had potential, it's well written. however, out of nowhere it got confirmed that it is a cultivation novel, people saying "mortals" and don't even get started with the stupid logic of tiered cities, I mean has a lambo and a gigantic villa,but it sucks because it's from a low grade city? so in the big cities are all the houses made of gold? do they fly? what are hey made of? and the hidden cultivation families. .. . meh I thought it was going to be a urban fantasy with mild superpowers like hero academia, just more hidden, but it's not at all.

UnluckyBandit
UnluckyBanditLv2UnluckyBandit

The whole plot was just full of unnatural and unrealistic events that completely ruined the immersion for me. The author just kept on forcing situations and writing bad characters with no motive other than to be cannon fodder for MC to face slap. It's essentially just a very surface level wish fulfillment novel which some people may enjoy so try it if that's your thing but I'd say otherwise you might be better off looking for something else.

pasito_tun_tun
pasito_tun_tunLv4pasito_tun_tun

Reveal spoiler

I_AM_1852
I_AM_1852Lv4I_AM_1852

my first time reading a faceslapping type novel. throughly enjoyed it. pity that only a few chapters. hope the author will mass release them.

SeniorSereneLotus
SeniorSereneLotusLv4SeniorSereneLotus

𝐖𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐐𝐮𝐚𝐥𝐢𝐭𝐲: 5/5. Super good, there are mistakes here and there, but those are minimal, almost to the point you can count them in one hand. 𝐔𝐩𝐝𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐒𝐭𝐚𝐛𝐢𝐥𝐢𝐭𝐲: 5/5. no need to say anything about this, the author said it in the synopsis. 𝐒𝐭𝐨𝐫𝐲 𝐃𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐥𝐨𝐩𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭: 5/5. So far so good, you can see the character development as you get farther into the story. 𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐃𝐞𝐬𝐢𝐠𝐧: 5/5. At the start, the character was weak willed, and physically weak. However, as the story progressed, the mc changed and became better than his past self (wont say much cuz I don’t wanna spoil it). people complained that the mc was too weak and naïve and other stuff, even I complained (on my other account, AncestralDragonGod, forgot the password so I can’t login (╥_╥)), however, I still chose to continue reading the novel as I wanted to see its end, and I can say I am not disappointed by how the story has progressed up until now. 𝐖𝐨𝐫𝐥𝐝 𝐛𝐚𝐜𝐤𝐠𝐫𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐝: 5/5. Perfect. Just, perfect.

Wobyanga
WobyangaLv13Wobyanga

The overall story theme is childish and full of vanity for me who is interested in developmental issues.. But, the writing is good and the author is committed to the story.

Luzifer_Gomez
Luzifer_GomezLv2Luzifer_Gomez

First time reading a novel like this. And I have to say i have been enjoying it so far, I wish it would have been better if MC is little bit more smarter as I feel like he isn't using his system to it's full potential. Overall quality is good. looking forward to what's coming next.

Kepstyy
KepstyyLv11Kepstyy

Hey author, will you be back with more frequent updates? A very fun and dynamic novel. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Tiago_Maia_1922
Tiago_Maia_1922Lv4Tiago_Maia_1922

the story in beginnin its pretty good but latter became a bit borring , it would be good if it was a non-harem and just develop the relationship with Stacey

First_Account_1462
First_Account_1462Lv3First_Account_1462

it takes a month to update................

Brandon_Piening
Brandon_PieningLv14Brandon_Piening

It’s super far between chapters and the number or privileged chapters is stupid, not worth waiting for or reading only 1 chapter a week or 2. Should not have any privileges not worth it at all

Kepstyy
KepstyyLv11Kepstyy

Please, authors, post updates more often. It's all wonderful. The characters are very real and you can relate to them. And also the plot and system is very inventive.

Ayce_o_Spade
Ayce_o_SpadeLv15Ayce_o_Spade

I like the premi of the novel and have enjoyed it please don’t drop.

Proarar
ProararLv12Proarar

The story is all good and fun to read also please do stable update author I will always use my power stone for you :))) Also, keep your writing style or upgrade it further. Thanks for the wonderful story, author. Keep safe always!

Assasin_Reader
Assasin_ReaderLv11Assasin_Reader

good writing, interesting start, characters lacking a bit of depth as of now.

naruto_shippuden_6468
naruto_shippuden_6468Lv4naruto_shippuden_6468

unique in its own way , love how the world background is slowly been introduced in subtitleb form showing that there's more to the story