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Extra's Descent

Author: athex
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Read ‘Extra's Descent’ Online for Free, written by the author athex, This book is a Fantasy Novel, covering ACTION Fiction, ROMANCE Light Novel, ADVENTURE Internet Novel, and the synopsis is: ‘Is this… an interface?’Despite having no knowledge of where he was, he was familiar with the system interface.After all...

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‘Is this… an interface?’ Despite having no knowledge of where he was, he was familiar with the system interface. After all, it was oddly similar to the novel he closely followed. But… ‘This doesn’t make any sense, I should have died already.’ —--------------------------- After a tragic accident, he found himself transmigrated inside one of his favorite novels. He realized he was now Brandon Locke, an unfamiliar character, an extra. Armed with knowledge about the future, Brandon now has to traverse this new world all on his own. ---------------------------------- Join the Discord Server for the character illustrations and such! Discord Server: https://discord.gg/zukKB2ppDp Hoping for support on my first novel. Comments are well appreciated!

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     "इन गरीब की कुटिया मे आप क्या आयोगे  सहाब?, आंखो से नशा और ओंठो से प्यारिसी स्माईल देकर शालिनी 'विजय' को अपने कुटिया आने का नेवता दे रही थी। ये वही शालिनी थी जिसे गाँववालोंने शापित बोलकर गाव से बाहर निकाला था। अब शालिनी जंगल के उन क्षेत्र में रहती थी जहा तीरथपूर गाँव को आना सख्त मना था। विजय उसी सीमा पे खड़ा था जहाँ से अंदर आना बोहत ही खतरनाक था। "तेरी कुटिया क्या, हम तो तेरे चूल्हे तक आने की चाहत रखते है मिस। बस ये मजबूरी की बेड़िया टूटने का इंतजार है। जिस दिन ये बेड़िया टूटेंगी ना। फिर देखना। वैसेही हैम आप लोगो से नही डरते, डरते है तो बस अपनो से।" विजय शालिनी को अपनी मजबूरी बता रहा था। एक मीठी सी स्माईल देकर शालिनी विजय को बोली," बेड़ियों में तो हम बंधे है सहाब, ठाकुर को बता दीजिएगा, हमे उनकी बाहे बोहत पसंद है। एक दिन हम उनकी बाहो में जरूर आनेवाले है। "ठाकुर का पीछा कब छोडोगी? हमेशा उनका ही बैंड बजाती रहती हो?" विजय शालिनी को सवाल करते हुए बोला। शालिनी फिर हसते हुए बोली,"पुराना हिसाब जो चुकता करना है।" विजय हँसता हुआ बोला,"मिस शालिनी, अपनीं औकात ना भूलियेगा, ठाकुर की बाहे क्या उनकी हवेली को भी छूने की औकात नही है तुम्हारी।" फिर से एक मीठा स्माईल देते हुए शालिनी बोली,"हमारी औकात का इम्तिहान मत लेना सहाब। न जाने ऐसी कितनी हवेली को कुटिया में बदलने की एहमियत रखते है हैम। बस समय सही हो।" "समय का तो पता नही, लेकिन ठाकुर तुझे ऐसी जगह लाकर ठोकेगा ना, जहाँ गोली भी आवाज नही करेगी। सारा गाँव लगा दिया है तेरे पीछे। वो भी बंदूक लेके। पगला गया है वोह।" विजय ठाकुर की शक्तियों का प्रदर्शन करते हुए बोला। "ये शेरनी का इलाका है सहाब। बता दे गाँववालों को। अब ये गुल्लेर चलानेवाली शालिनी नही रही। कट्टा चलाना हम भी जानते है। अभी भी वक्त है, हमारे गिरोह में शामिल हो जाओ। और रही बात ठोकने की, ठोक तो वो तुझे भी देगा, बस कामना करो कि ठाकुर को तेरी बाते पता न चले।" शालिनी विजय का हाथ अपने हाथ मे लेते हुए बोली। "वैसे क्या हलचल है तेरे कबिले में? सुना है तू "रुद्रा" का सपोर्ट लेनेवाली है।" विजय शालिनी का दूसरा हाथ थामते हुए बोला। "हं! शालीनी को किसी के सपोर्ट की जरूरत नही। हमारी कुटिया ही काफी है ठाकुर की खटिया खड़ी करने के लिए। बस एकबार इलेक्शन नजदीक आने दो। वैसे उस बिग डील के बारे में क्या सोचा है ठाकुर ने?" शालिनी ठाकुर की जानकारी लेते हुए बोली। विजय जानकारी देते हुए शालिनी को अपनी ओर खीचते हुए बोला,"डील का तो  पता नही। लेकिन तेरा दिल एक दिन जरूर चुरा लूँगा।" To be Continue ....

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Entrail_JI
Entrail_JILv15Entrail_JI

This will reach the peak. 🥰 I saw this randomly in my feed and saw the author so I thought I would write this to encourage them. Writing looks great so good luck!

Tsukasa0
Tsukasa0ModeratorTsukasa0

Hola!. I'm here to give a review on one of my favorite novels I read right now on this platform. This is a complete honest review from me as a reader who is caught up with non privilege, and my position as a moderator of this novel has nothing to do with it. Let's start with the obvious. Of course arriving on this novel you might think it's a good old cliche exta novel, but I beg to differ that ITS NOT. In no way does the protagonist hide his power or try to keep the maincast away. He is not weak either as he is quick to catch up to the main cast. Story wise, this is a complete different route from the extra genre though I do agree that some starting chapters are similar, but lets be honest. Don't we all expect the starting to be similar in an extra novel. The character development of characters is very good, and though you might hate the author in some mini arcs for example the cultural festival, please stop being an average wn reader and read further to see why he did that. The characters are neither too flushed out or just blatantly dry. If they are, then that's just something that author develops further. The pacing of the novel is perfect as well, its neither too slow nor too fast. Which is also one of the main reasons why I love this novel. The plot of the novel is really different from extra novels and I mean it. In the normal cliche novels where the extra just has to kill demons, this is quite different as there are further things that come on later into the story. The author also perfectly sets emotions, depth and character development at each plot point. The stability of updates is something you absolutely don't need to worry about as author updates 2 chaps daily while also doing mass releases time to time. Overall, I highly recommend this novel to everyone and I would really hope that they give this a try and find out for yourself that this is infact not glazing and an actual honest review of the novel.

RayanArcadia
RayanArcadiaLv14RayanArcadia

From what I've seen so far, this novel does have a lot of potential. Villain novels are quite garbage whereas extra novels are now being overtaken and corrupted by those Chinese authors. Luckily this one doesn't follow your Chinese troupe. The mc actually befriends the main character for once unlike all those other trash where you see him stealing all the main characters "chances" or fate. Now to talk about the novel, our mc is an average lad from Earth who got thrown into this Magical Earth. Unlike novels like The Novel's Extra and Author's POV, where the mc's are mocked for using strange weapons or doing weird actions, the mc in here is originally seen as a talented fellow. Even later on people don't usually look down on him or try to get into fights with him. On the other hand, the original mc of the novel is the person who is looked down even though he's Rank 1 which makes it interesting. The dynamics of this novel between the characters are good enough and.. I better see more chapters real soon or else, Author just know that you're going in my basement. This isn't a threat, I'm merely stating the future.

takechi
takechiLv2takechi

Since I'm helping the author edit, I have to leave a 5 star review. Author is a beast at writing, in just a day he'd finish 8 chapters already. Mass release your 50 stockpile when?

ItzNeedless
ItzNeedlessLv4ItzNeedless

(TL;DR at the end)At first, I simply started this novel for more extra brainrot. I came in expecting the same old generic bs we see in literally every other extra novel in existence. I did not get what I wanted. But was I disappointed? NO. 'Extra's Descent', is unlike any other extra novel I have ever read(and I have read a LOT). First of all, the writing quality. The writing style of this novel is simple. It is more or less the same as what you can see in korean webnovels, or even in Entrail_JI's 'Advent of the three calamities'. Simple, yet efficient. It is a writing style I personally like a lot.[5/5] Next up, is the update stability. I have been reading this novel since it didn't even have a measly 10 chaps and I can guarantee you that not a day has passed without 2 chapters being dropped. And of course, the bonus chapters for meeting PS goals is being updated as well.[5/5] Story Development. I have to say this is most probably the most surprising part of this novel for me. Like I said, I went expecting a generic story and at first, I believed that is what I got. Oh boy was I wrong. What I thought to be plot holes at first turned out to be plot points for a major reveal. What I thought to be a generic story at first, turned out to be a gem hidden in plain sight. If you are going to read this novel, give it at least 50 chapters before you drop. Trust me when I say it will be worth it.[5/5] Character Design. We are getting to the good points(oh well, everything before was also good points but this does require a special mention). The character design of this novel is one of its strongest points. Each character, offers to substance to the novel and are a major driving force for the plot. In fact, I would dare say this is a character-driven story despite its enthralling plot.[6/5] World Building. Now this is where the novel hits a bump in the road. Everything, novel or otherwise, has its flaws. While I wouldn't go so far as to call it a flaw, the world building of this novel is in fact one of the only things I find to be lacking. Of course, it offers a unique twist by getting rid of demons. That's right, this is an extra novel WITHOUT DEMONS OR OTHER GENERIC RACES LIKE ELVES AND DWARVES AND ORCS. But I still find it to be lacking because we know nearly nothing about the world. All the information we need is revealed as the plot progresses but we don't get much additional information.[4.5/5] TL;DR: Read at least 50 chaps before deciding to drop, great story, spectacular characters, KR style writing, 2 chaps per day, NO WAR AMONGST GENERIC RACES BS and 100% recommended read. WQ:5/5, SU:5/5, SD:5/5, CD:6/5, WB:4.5/5. What are you still waiting for? Go read.

TheDaoOfSleep
TheDaoOfSleepLv4TheDaoOfSleep

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Okojus
OkojusModeratorOkojus

I'm writing this review after reading 36 chapters and so far it looks really promising, but to go in depth a bit more:- 1.The writing quality is very good and I didn't notice any grammatical errors while reading, which is always a plus. 2.the upload schedule so far seems good and author is active on discord so you can go barrage him on there, if he ever stops uploaded. 3.As for the novel itself, I can't say much as it's just starting, but I really like the MC and his skill weaver ability, also his personality is pretty likeable, even the side cast seem developed and likeable, which I really enjoy. 5.Overall I would recommend this novel to anyone who's a fan of the the genre.

Crypthh
CrypthhModeratorCrypthh

Review at chapter 63: The story is actually good and doesn't follow most cliché tropes. The main character isn't a beta who hides in the shadows all the time or decides to follow the plot or stay away from the protagonist of the book he was sent into. The story is still in its early stages, so there might be some things that are yet to be properly developed. The interactions with the characters though are really fun to read, as each one doesn't seem bland and has a personality that you would enjoy.

Melitia_Snek
Melitia_SnekLv5Melitia_Snek

Just binged it. Some small inconsistencies, but overall, a very good read. Takes a somewhat cliche situation and changes it enough so it feels fresh. The MC is a bit bland, but to compensate, the other characters are more developed than they normally would be in an average Webnovel story. Would recommend it, not a waste of time. Writing Quality: ★★★★ -No obvious mistakes and an easy read. Story Development: ★★★ -Cliche but not borning. Character design: ★★★★ -Good overall, but should fletch out the MC some more. Update Stability: ★★★★★ World Background: ★★★★ -Actually interesting and more thought-out than normal novels.

Arkella
ArkellaLv3Arkella

Honestly, it's just bland. I wasn't even going to read it but for the sake of the Daily Recommendation Fastpast, I felt compelled to do so. The writing quality is just so bland. There's just no description, no vitality, nothing that can spark up the writing. The author just writes things in, but doesn't take the effort to describe or elaborate on the topic. Maybe, my expectations are unfounded, judging by the incredibly high average rating on the novel, but I find it unbearable. Regarding, character design, story development and world background, I really have nothing to address. Writing quality surmounts all redeeming qualities of this novel. Evenmore, most of these characters feel ingenuine.

Deandre_Young_0854
Deandre_Young_0854Lv13Deandre_Young_0854

side characters are more fleshed out than the mc enjoyable mc, just straight up lacks common sense you can say he died a teen but the lack of intelligence is concerning academy sucks and the author making the mc plot armor to obvious to the point you're just like "yeah this is definitely plot armor” also it tries way to hard to be funny the first like i think 40 chapters is straight up bad comedy me practically doesn't do anything frl the overpowered is very misleading i don’t know why the author even added that cause 100 chapters in he isn’t overpowered and he just ends up getting bailed out like i said side characters got more fleshed out character than our actual mc which makes this even more underwhelming

DaoistuK3Ovv
DaoistuK3OvvLv3DaoistuK3Ovv

If I’m being honest the biggest issue with this series is the fact that he’s joining the primordials for no apparent reason simply because some random guy told him to there is no benefit to doing this it’s not even like they have the same goals so I wonder why this is happening I really wanted to drop the series honestly because there’s no point to this it just happened in the span of half a chapter it doesn’t move the story forward you can argue it holds it back because instead of getting stronger and finding people to help combat the future threat he’s mingling with lowlifes and thugs who won’t hesitate to run for their lives I really hoped it was just like a threat but the author made it official later on

DaoistBoTDEK
DaoistBoTDEKLv13DaoistBoTDEK

I feel the storyline and the way thinks progress is really good and organic.It is the beginning of the novel but i can confidently say the best are the characters, the author knows how to write them and the side charachters don't feel one dimensional.All in all, im excited to keep reading more and see how the novel continues.

RYOU_8448
RYOU_8448Lv2RYOU_8448

story progress is slow and instead of plot building there is lot of family and love drama is going on. For me it is frustrating to read all this sit. well good luck to author for this.

Black_Box_3081
Black_Box_3081Lv3Black_Box_3081

i really love it the novel,but the moment where to the part where Brandon realized his feelings for Rachel,i started to feel bored.no offense but,The novel was really amazing, it's just that i just don't like romance.

crazy_writ31
crazy_writ31Lv4crazy_writ31

I love your novel ....... . . . . . . . .

Wren666
Wren666Lv2Wren666

Very good novel. Waiting for more [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

DaoistLwCnMT
DaoistLwCnMTLv4DaoistLwCnMT

I was so excited when I read first 10 chapter I wanted to review at that time but i control myself so that i can read more chapters and review properly so here's my review-- i am loving the current development of story the character there personality and also Gojo reference after so much time i found a good novel with good story I was so bored of reading other novels that I was thinking now good novels with nice story doesn't exist now every where is bad novel with same story of op mc,it's harem and bad development.but this novel is best it should be in at least top 5 of ranking this is a quiet different from other extra mc, transmigrated reader novels.i wish it had more chapters i am so excited to read new chapters,the mc is not like other who distant itself from protagonist and the skill of mc his nah i would win mentality everything I love about him the story is also progressing nicely , i am thinking of what can be improved in this novel but for now I can't seem to get what you improve because from my perspective it's a perfect I was thinking of what should be bad or should improved about this novel but I am not getting any thoughts for now and trust me i thought for so much time but i didn't get anything that was wrong or needed improvement for now this is my review I know there not much that the author can get from my review but is i reviewed . and any one reading this review to get idea if they should read it or not i am just saying read it give it a try its something new we don't get to see a lot in novel. GIVE MORE JUJUTSU KAISEN REFERENCE OR ANY OTHE ANIME. AUTHOR I CURSE YOU TO COMPLETE THIS NOVEL.

DaoistQuirky
DaoistQuirkyLv3DaoistQuirky

haven't read yet but looking at the reviews it seems pretty good.Wait I wanted to ask something.What is MCs type I mean like hero/anti hero/villain/anti villain? AND LAST QUESTION --

ifinnu
ifinnuLv13ifinnu

I love it. author knows what he doing. ‐-

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