Reviews of Exalted Warlock

One word: Update. Trust me, updating twice a week will not work in Webnovel. You gotta update everyday to actually get readers and expose your book to a good audience. Your writing quality is amazing and I would love to follow Magnus' journey more. All you need to do is update daily. Readers here are impatient and will give up on a book if there is no regular update. Do keep writing! :)

I read the few chapters of this novel, and it just hooked me to it. I didn't have any expectations of it before but after reading a few chapters I just got hooked to it.

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Here is my go for a review. Others seems to praise you for the details in your dialogues, sure, I will give you that. However, it is too detailed! You need to increase the pace in conversations by using dialogue tags, not putting unnecessary additional descriptions trailing behind it, take this example: "Ahh, I knew this Australian way back in high school, we even dated for a while. Ahh!" She said once more as she sighed out loud, while a look of remembrance was on her face. "Now I am regretting not marrying him and having him move us to Australia." Why not change the dialogue tag to "She sighed in nostalgia"? Remember, having too long of dialogue tags or action beats can interrupt the flow. Do consider this problem. Your character descriptions and personalities are great! Unfortunately, the visual about the world are still lacking. I don't know what the auto shop at the beginning looks like, what is inside a futuristic car looks like? What about the road and the hospital? How are they different from our current one? What about culture?