This story is very detailed and I like how the part about the gods and david are also given a few chapters. however, i think that you can make it more of a separate world than inside a novel.
simply put story has many holes and doesn't make sense sometime personally I'm done reading I read 50plus chapters. I hope author improves in the future
A promosing novel. i appreciate every chapter as unique. needs more updating stability. Realy like reading in a baritone voice in every mc's POV. feels like a breath of fresh air as the story goes.
Everytime i read him leaping i picture the hUlk Smashing shhhhh up lol great story cant wait for me like really I need more torUg lol All things green Dominate
А есть что-то похожее? Мне просто мало 85 глав, а ждать долго. Ох, сама идея, где главный герой из другой расы и довольно хладнокровен мне по нраву.Жаль, что тут он в первую очередь вождь, мне было бы дико интересно, если рассказывали историю, где он путешествует и становится сильнее.
I love the book the backgrounds is great love to see the story progress. Little criticism is the changes to point of view I can see it's for development but it gets annoying when I'm focused on this person or part of the story but this is a minor probable personal critique story still great. Pls more chapters.
very good novel to read my kind of favorite middle age fantasy👍🏻 the one thing lacking is lite R18 slave harem😒 doesn't have to have romance in it just do stuff a evil erotic pervert mc would do
My new Favorite novel. It World be Great if the novel had more Chapters and More chapters a week. Pls Author keep writing this novel. I really like everything about it. Thank you for writing this masterpiece 👏👏👏👏
This book is so well written. With proper developments for both the mc and the side characters. One of the best books I've read in a very long while.
I really like it. The only issue is the update frequency............................................................................................................
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Great book so far. Some minor mistake with spelling and grammar but still a great story. Great character design and one of the best world building I have seen in webnovel. I recommend this book to other who like nonhuman ruthless MC with no romance and great kingdom building.
good book so far can't wait for the next chapter. is it based off a different book? the author makes comments about it but I don't know if that's part of the story.
Good novel and nice ideas for the evolutions.....exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
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This was an amazing book I wish there was more to read and as such I'll keep an eye out for any updates. Great work 👏