Xiao Qiye
It’s the typical weak to strong Mary Sue web novel filled with nonsensical, one dimensional characters and vapid plot. Character actions seriously don’t even make any sense. The kid-whose-name-I-forgot’s grandpa decides to kill the mc because she dueled his grandson???? Because apparently she’ll be a threat in the future???? That literally doesn’t make any sense at all. He literally goes from 0 to 100 in the span of one sentence. Like, “Hi, I’m Grandpa” to “I’m going to murder your ass cuz I don’t like you.” And the girl’s grandfather General Gu is so dense and terribly written I can’t even give legitimate instances. The characters are all one dimensional. The mc doesn’t have any emotion other than strong anger and that’s legit it. Literally you can use one word to describe each character and that one word will be able to accurately portray the character from chapter 1 to the end. That is called terrible plot progression, terrible writing, terrible character design, and terrible world background. This web novel doesn’t even deserve a 1/5 because of how ****ty it is. If y’all want a better one to read, just read “It’s Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future”. This one is significantly better in terms of everything. In fact, it even deserves its own rating whereas this one doesn’t even deserve a rating of 1/5.
Mediocre. Story development: nothing really, basically you have a generic and bland development and is that, 2 stars. Character Design: Simple and utterly awful, the character are like bad puns with ludicrous personalities coming of a bad written book for children, the mc have no consistency other than being a trope, 1 star. Word Background: Again nothing other than mediocre, there's nothing to praise.
Utter garbage read all 300+ chapters easier since it was all in 1 sitting. Same old formula as in all the others from this setting. How dare you insult me im the great blah blah no one dares to insult me blah blah, rinse and repeat every 2-3 chapters, literaly happens every couple of chapters 300+ in and people still act as shes a good for nothing they keep forgetting who she is amazingly, not to mention almost everytime she orders someone to kill them someone else always shows up to stop it by say how dare you do this we're blah blah, seriously everytime
Alert: i respect and support translator and i only bash author So tbh this novel is so annoying i dropped it at chapter 86 the plot is bad the story is mediocre, and typical mainstream female mc who sold herself to powerful male mc, well translator good luck and keep up the good work, as for author you can lick my wee wee
Please translate this novel!!! 😆 I really adore this story and have been reading it on volarenovels for a while. This book along with the Reign of Hunters are what really introduced me to the world of Chinese novels. Now I am completely obsessed and totally need more. Please like the book so I can get my fix- I mean we can enjoy this story *cough cough*... Anyway *puppy dog eyes and whimper* I can't go back to a world without these stories.