ohhdearme
Unbearably frustrating read. If that was just a smut with some Chad-tundercock, it would be much more pleasant to read. But we got what we got. A Semi-serious story with hints of something unpleasant in background. Mc that, my God, comes straight from shounen-genre anime. Polite, kind, gentle and have no balls. But most glaring things he have no brain and for the ten chapters straight, was permanently confused and never try to learn or understand his position. He takes its so lightly, that I started to wonder if he was an imbecile. No thoughts, no character. And endless worry because he might offended someone, like he's kidnapper that was so nice to him... And apparently get killed her others summon, but hey, everybody make mistakes, right. Remind me of saito(Sato, I don't care about his name) servant of luiza-nulliza.... Call it's personal biased, but you can pull it differently, without tickling readers with obvious hints and this stunned mc,right? Or just go full smut. It's a valid choice. Either chapter, 10 he's gotten under mercy of cat-girl and priestess and on a verge of crying. In they light h-femdom contests - Japanese guy, there no need for words... P. S. This thing triggered me so hard, and this just a morning for me, thank you. Now I can works more enthusiastic for the whole day, doesn't mean I read another chapter or would recommend this story, though.
frustrating to read with the must stupid MC. if the mc just acted a little smarter this could definitely be a 5. but ignoring his own selfty cause summoner( kipnaper) feels bad that every hero she summons dies really? opening doors to random people in a random plays? I know its an ero novel and I should spec much but author writes so well it just frustrates me to read about such an MC done by an author who spells like a pro and knows grammar
seriously from the way you have written it ,it sounds like your mc was killed by the summoning, but he doesn't bat an eyelid. he then finds out that the "heroes " summoned are dropping like flies again barely a flicker of concern,drugged and basically raped, no worries. the whole time he just does whatever he's told. You cannot immerse your readers in your story if the characters reactions and behaviour are not believable, 5 chapters and I already could not continue .
Mc is a passive naieve fool with 0 presence that gets summoned by a elf princess that fuks and gets her previous summons Killed, she rapes the MC twice and her friend gives him aphrodisiac to rape him as well. The thIrd time they bind him to his bed with lvl 50 spells while he is lvl 1.. MC doesnt ask anything about lvls/system/why they raping him Because he doesnt want to offend them because he is to nice, then he gets told by someone that they enslaved him and can kill him whenever they want because when they summoned him they bind his soul to a relic what is mc reaction? Oh well..
Wooow .... this novel is so CRAZY. DAMN. I already knocked him out after mc fight? / Cure slut with s e x? Then he tells every secret. (Ancestors, farts, blood type?)They go to the guild .... and meet other prostitutes and decide to help her ?? if you like where mc who is D I L D O lives then this novel is for you(cougar toy)