EPSILON ODYSSEY

hello guys newbie writer here , this is my first time writing a novel so plzz if you are reading this novel give honest opinions in the comment section .I would like it if you guys would point out my mistakes . this novel is about 5 people getting Reincarnated in a peaceful magical world. it is a world with magic ,mythical creatures and different races .our mc is one of those lucky people that gets reincarnated ........or are they really lucky ? is the world really peaceful as it claims to be or is there anything hiding in it . find out how our mc along with his friend uncovers the truth