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Epic of Caterpillar

Author: PancakesWitch
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Orchamus
OrchamusLv15

Fairly decent system read, while like most systems it can be a slog to go through occasionally, it's also fairly unique later on and provides interesting surprises. The MC is also evolving in a rather amusing way, both physically and mentally.

Kifar5834
Kifar5834Lv15

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WinterKing4
WinterKing4Lv11

Love it, I love evolution, systems, and monster girls are the best sometimes there are a few spelling errors and some sentences that don't read well but there are very few of those. Great read.

Dradel_Lait
Dradel_LaitLv4

One of my favorite story. This writing isn't that good in the first chapters but it became much better later. All the characters have something and harem members didn't stop being interesting once they join it. In fact some (like the recent aquarian princess) begin to have a development only after joining the harem. There is no characters forgotten (exept Wagyu maybe) and we can see that the world is big and hide some secrets. Highly recommended.

ACrazySheep
ACrazySheepLv5

It's a great novel, although there are some flaws. The MC personality is pretty annoying, but you just need to tone him down a bit. The fight scenes are also pretty lackluster, how to say it, you don't feel the seriousness of it at all. Fight scenes are supposed to be exciting. Excluding that, the rest is great. It's a great idea and the history isn't rushed, the chapters are also of considerable length. Keep up the good work.

LordZAxeoQ
LordZAxeoQLv13

No kidding the early chapters make me want to vomit but it gets better and better in the mid-later chapter , so toughen up new readers and dont quit early.

VashuRajput269
VashuRajput269Lv13

It's kind of a new way to start a story but nonetheless it's refreshing to see a new story, character building is also good, looking forward for more..

Ezi_Ezington
Ezi_EzingtonLv12

So I gotta admit I did not get the reference the author made towards my original review, but deleting a review after 1-2 months, like why? Yeah my review wasnt a fake 5* one but cmon I didnt think censorhip would be thang here. I think it was a perfectly decent review with no insults or other baseless assumptions. Back to the review in Tldr form: First~dozen chapter only! Many 1to1 copies from well known manga which indicates laziness. A rather young way of writing which is rly a matter of taste for everyone themself. Story so far very one dimensional "dang isnt here supposed to be X?" "Look there is X!" In the beginning I thought stamina would be a repeating problem for the mc it seemed to have vanished almost immediately, kinda sad I thought it was an interesting concept where they rly had to manage their stamina consumption well. If you feel like deleting again, dont worry I wont write another review. Im lazy too after all :D

ZA_WARUDO_
ZA_WARUDO_Lv3

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Blacklotus
BlacklotusLv12

Overall a good novel. The premise is very good and the concepts EXTREMELY interesting. The major downside is that the power difference between evolutions is not noticeable and the main character status screen hasnt be showns for so many chapters because of the thousands of skills he now has. Even though the author has good ideas they have been poorly implented which leads me to speculate a lack of prior planning when writing the novel. Overall a good read and would recommend it.

Eom
EomLv4

All of my power stones are go to this novel amazing as always 😍😍😍😍 AaaaaaaaaaaaaaaMmmmmmmmmmmmmmAaaaaaaaaaaaZzzzzzzzzzzzİiiiiiiiiiiiiNnnnnnnnnnnnnnGggggggggggg

reilusama
reilusamaLv4

good........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

dragon_Individual
dragon_IndividualLv14

I Love this story to the extreme. I like how the system works and the writing. Shocking to me this story isn’t well know. But keep up the good work it will be noticed!

kiddeath1998
kiddeath1998Lv15

I usually hate, I mean hate, I mean really despise novels that make their MC male and then turn them into female. not only do I find that concept idiotic, because why would you ever create a male character and then make it female, just start with the female character!!!! You don't need the male character added on to it. There are many successful novels with a female role but I digress. I'm extremely into this web novel, I find it very entertaining and the pacing is done very well, so five out of five.

Boy_Awesome
Boy_AwesomeLv4

Overall I think it's great but the one thing that irks me is that it's kind of hard to notice all the wives since she has so many. Well, I haven't really caught up to the updates but for now, it's just hard for me to even remember their names. I hope that the author does do a better job of assimilating characters. I honestly barely remember half the wives because their almost irrelevant.

Undawn
UndawnLv14

This is my first review for a genuinely good book. At the start it was a little cringey and times with a few mistakes but the overall story was so interesting that you could just ignore it. The story seems pretty cliche with the whole reincarnation business but as you get into later chapters you would realize that everything we were told and just took at face value would truly be some of the most crucial info of understanding the world. As one of the new readers who only saw it as an interesting story to pass the time it truly caught me off guard on how great it was. I am so glad I picked it up and I hope the author keeps their health in check since they've been pumping so many updates for their books. Now I hope your day is really CHAOTIC😏😏(this is a joke for readers 700+😅) And just because I'm bored check out Pancakes other storys because everything is important for the true plot

Kimok
KimokLv1

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micha4flame
micha4flameLv15

The World is very detailed and the mythology is very thought out. Also the Author made different point of view which is very refreshing. The R-18 stuff is also very good [img=recommend]

Longhu3
Longhu3Lv4

This is probably the novel i'm enjoying the most right now. I like the MC and the other support characters. I like how the MC is overpowered and always one step ahead of his enemies I love how the all the different races and skills all the diversity. Kinda sucks it's just 1/2 chapters/day *crying*.

SankokuraXD
SankokuraXDLv14

This is an incredible story with fun and loveable characters. The character development and world building puts most stories to shame. The main character's path is one I very much look forward to seeing where it will lead. Some of the level grinding is a bit slow and boring, but what level grinding isn't? I can't wait to see what happens next!