pas mal du tout, j'attends la prochaine histoire, j'ai confiance que ca soi encore mieux. allez go c'est maintenant s'il vous plait. et merci pôur cette histoire
i love it at first I thought it was going to be boring cuz he's so strong from the start but there is a really good story and the characters are really good
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I had to say that this story is... Strangely...good... It would be better if some correction could be made and some holes closed...but Strangely fit with the rest. At the start, the grammar was horrible but became better with the story... so a bad start with a not really but strangely good end. Some part are funny and enjoyable...other let you scream for the cringe. Well all things put together...thanks for the story and be better with the other ones!
Quite surprising turn of events with MC becoming a powerful werewolf to getting Rosalie Hale being his mate to creating his own pack and forming a alliance with The Quilete Tribe reading this book and all of the things that have happened especially to The Cullen Family is quite surprising and even more so intriguing way u did this book along with the different characters do love the personality and jokes of Ocean look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
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it was quite short but a beloved read of mine in a long while I did like what the author did that changed the story from just a basic copy and paste kind of thing basically making it their own anyway might a well check it out. Imma miss this one I think.
My favorite book on this app 🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾😐🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾😐😐😐😐🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾🫶🏾
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Usually I don't read twilight ff since I've left the fandom long time ago, but I see this in my recommendation so I decided to try and boii I'm not disappointed, this story is fast paced and I love it, at the beginning it's a little weird for me but it's only for the first two chapters, after that I can't stop reading I like Damon personality so much, and how he interacted with his pack, such a beautiful bond they have, I would say more but I'm not good with words
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I've seen a lot of people commenting about how "forced" the romance is and to that I say... Try reading any other twilight fic, they are literally just as forced if not even more, and while there are quite a few spelling mistakes and relatively lazy moments "like 'u' instead of 'you'." but overall it's really not bad.
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bro you made twilight so good I love it hoping to see more a good detailed background nice character development complex yet straight storyline